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[ourdenouement]

Roxas and Hikaru Hitachiin - for some reason, Roxas didn't have a last name, and Hikaru never questioned it because maybe Roxas was an orphan or something, he'd never know - sat in Hikaru's room, decorated fancily and tastefully, as expected from the son of a highly visual fashion designer and the son of a CEO. Roxas looked around in wonder, blue

Comments

[letxequalnull]

You have an error in your story.

[ourdenouement]

Where?! I did extensive research!

[letxequalnull]

Axel is hardly a woman.

[ourdenouement]

Creative license~ Axel's a woman now. Unless you want Roxas to be a homohomo.

[letxequalnull]

It would hardly bother me if he were.

[ourdenouement]

Okay, then I'll change it! Thanks for the criticism- it's totally okay if Roxas wants to be a homohomo that likes girls!

[letxequalnull]

It would, perhaps, be a little closer to the truth.

[ourdenouement]

ROXAS IS REALLY A HOMOHOMO THAT LIKES GIRLS?!

[letxequalnull]

It would be better to say that he is as of yet largely uninterested in the matter.

[ourdenouement]

I don't get it.

[letxequalnull]

He is inexperienced in such matters.

[ourdenouement]

Then I'll totally help him! I'm an expert!

[letxequalnull]

I wish you luck in the task.

[ourdenouement]

You don't think I can?

[letxequalnull]

You may be able to. You may not.

[ourdenouement]

What kind of answer is that?!