Lurks-no-MOAR! With fic.

Aug 06, 2007 18:28

Hi! *waves* I'm Insidiae, call me Diae or Audrey or Hey you! ...Or nothing at all, I mean, I don't mean to impose or anything >_>

Um, sorry. Well, in any case, I've been lurking here for a while, but now that I've finallyt written Ouranfic, I'm deciding to post. Um, yay?

TItle: Family Skeleton
Author: insidiaeRating: PG ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

misterwalnut August 7 2007, 00:24:22 UTC
OH, HELL. -FALLS OVER LAUGHING-

The crack was excellent. And funny. But you don't need to hear it from me.

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insidiae August 7 2007, 00:35:40 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Actually the fact that it's crack is unexpected. It started out as a really angsty idea, and then branched out into two stories -one humor (this), and one mega-angst (which I am in the process of writing). I'm glad I was able to achieve crack without potty humor, because pottyhumor!crack just fails to be amusingin my opinion. Thanks for commenting!

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kane_shi_megami August 7 2007, 00:41:40 UTC
The girl, to her credit, takes it like a man.

The Host Club, Kyouya thinks, is one big, happy, incestuous family. And he is proud to be their mother.

These two comments are priceless and perfect for this story. Absolutely hilarious XD

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insidiae August 7 2007, 01:01:27 UTC
I'm SO glad someone picked up on the "The girl. to her credit, takes it like a man." line! Honestly, when I first wrote it, I didn't even realize the irony in the phrase, but it ended up being one of my favorite sentences in the story.

Thanks for the comment~

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_secretpassion_ August 7 2007, 14:40:18 UTC
I admit that I wasn't going to read this (don't take offense, I don't often read fanfics on LJ) but the cut text just grabbed me. It was very good. Great job!

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insidiae August 7 2007, 15:56:17 UTC
I'm happy you did end up reading it! Yes, as it turns out, I generally think of a single sentence (in this case, what I used for the lj-cut) that I think sounds pretty cool and catches attention, and then I build a story around it.

I write summaries and then think of a story to go with it after XD.

Thank you~

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box_of_doom August 10 2007, 11:15:35 UTC
Oh, that was awesome. That was just awesome.

The order in which they came out, everyone's reactions, it was all so perfect. Especially Tamaki saying that all his children were growing up and leaving them behind (Even IF the older couple are the "neighbours").

As for the incestuous thing, if my facts are correct, only the twins really pose a high risk of... birth problems. Especially if Honey and Mori are second cousins/first cousins once removed (which I tend to believe). The whole homosexuality thing...... yeah, they'll probably have problems with that.... ^^;;;;

But yes. That was quite awesome. Go Mommy and his dysfunctional family!

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insidiae August 10 2007, 21:20:48 UTC
Thank you! This story has gotten such a great response, I'm stunned.

(And yes, I reread the second book today and realized that Hunny and Mori were probably distant enough to not cause those problems, but mpreg is enough to squick me. Seriously, who thought of that? It's called adopting, gaiz. Also, that they're naighbors - DETAILS, WHO NEEDS THEM?).

Anyway~ Thank you so muxh for commenting.

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themadpoker August 10 2007, 20:02:09 UTC
As he watches them, the dark-haired boy smirks. If Tamaki plans on divorcing him for their daughter, Kyouya will take him to the cleaners.

There's a distinct possibility I'm going to run around the Internet quoting this at everybody I see. xD Great job.

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insidiae August 10 2007, 21:25:13 UTC
YAY! Somebody besides me likes that line!

Actually, that's my favorite line from the story. I thought I was the coolest thing since sliced bread when I wrote it. I thought I was so witty. Clearly, as if this story doesn't demonstrate it enough, my sense of humor leaves lots to be desired >_>.

Please do! If I ever find one of my lines somewhere other than the story it came from, my heart and head with undoubtedly fill with glee and hot air, respectively.

Sankyuu~

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