Looking for some help
I hope this is allowed here. If not, mods, please just let me know and I'll delete the post.
For this year's mpregbigbang, I've written a Sherlock/John story. It's finished, but it's written by a girl who's lived her entire life in the deep south of the US, and I don't want to take the chance that I've stuck anything ridiculously American in there that's going to ruin the whole story for British readers.
Is there anyone in this comm who'd be willing to take a look at it for me and point out any glaring errors in terms or phrasing? The story is about 14k. Thanks in advance.
For this year's mpregbigbang, I've written a Sherlock/John story. It's finished, but it's written by a girl who's lived her entire life in the deep south of the US, and I don't want to take the chance that I've stuck anything ridiculously American in there that's going to ruin the whole story for British readers.
Is there anyone in this comm who'd be willing to take a look at it for me and point out any glaring errors in terms or phrasing? The story is about 14k. Thanks in advance.