Comments | oultrepreu: i could not ask for a sweeter downfall (Tenipuri, Yukimura/Sanada/Yanagi)

oultrepreu

i could not ask for a sweeter downfall (Tenipuri, Yukimura/Sanada/Yanagi)

Oct 29, 2011 23:24

i could not ask for a sweeter downfall
Tenipuri; Yukimura/Sanada/Yanagi
PG; 4092 words
Yukimura is back in town. Sanada doesn't tell the entire truth. Yanagi doesn't know everything, though he wishes he did. Uni-era fic.

Warnings: Always-a-girl!Yukimura, intention to commit adultery.

For willowscry in top_cagnotte, with the following prompt:
A Sanada/Yukimura/ ( Read more... )

tenipuri:yukimura/sanada/yanagi, comm:top_cagnotte, tenipuri

Comments 4

absolutehymn007 October 30 2011, 06:41:05 UTC

"one that evokes the beauty of petals falling on a spring day in a pool of perfect colour, while Seiichi's prettiness is sharp and piercing, the beauty of a finely crafted katana, cloaked promises sheathed in unbending will."

This was simply beautiful! The lush detail, the careful thought, the emotions being expressed with or without words, and the depth of their friendship was a joy to read. I am glad I saw this just before I was going to bed because it was wonderful :)

postingwhore October 30 2011, 07:57:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

I just have so many feelings it's impossible to contain them all lizzypan November 1 2011, 03:11:28 UTC

ohmygosh okay so hi. :'D I read this fic a few days back on ffnet and I was just like, spellbound not so much for the fic as a whole but for all the little parts like Sanada's omiai and Yanagi's reluctance and Yukimura's absolute A+ characterization and ohhhh geez the references to Yamato Nadeshiko had me like, dying and this is such a long sentence but it was the great writing in this and little parts of EVERYTHING that just made this fic stand out so much for me and alkdfjgn;dkf I loved it. ;__ ( ... )

Re: I just have so many feelings it's impossible to contain them all postingwhore November 1 2011, 08:49:39 UTC

Oh hi! I am so flattered, you have no idea! I love that you liked the little parts because that's totally my thing, haha! So I'm really happy that they stood out for you.

And I am especially flattered that my characterisation of Rikkai really works for you! And everything else! :'D tysm for the comment, bb! ♥ I'm super happy that you enjoyed this and my other stuff as well! :D That's what I as an author want out of my writing, so it's really great to hear that! :D

And I'm not bothered about reviews so if you feel up to leaving one on ffnet, go for it, but if not, then it doesn't matter :)