rozaroni mentioned cheesesteaks, and now I want one. Unfortunately, there are none (that are any good) to be had, so I have to settle for Double Stuf Oreos. ::munches::
I'm better! No more sinus problems! Yet, the head trip has just begun.
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Dialogue woes )
Not a dumb question at all! It stands for unresolved sexual tension. Mainly flirting, innuendo, lots of lusty inner dialogue, but usually no overt sex or attempts at coupling. When I think of G/B in canon and on the show, their whole relationship was a study in UST!
I wouldn't worry about the dialogue. Of course I like dialogue in fics so I'm slightly biased. And while Brian and Justin don't talk much, G and B talk all the time. Think about all their lunches. Sure half of what they said (or all in G's case) was in code and made no sense, it was still talking. I would think dialogue would be very in character especially for B who talks to everyone and anyone.
It's interesting, because you're probably the first G/B-cognizant person I've talked to when I realized this little problem (well, besides the betas), and you make such sense, but still I'm nervous. Most of the really great G/B stories are dialogue-heavy, so I really don't know what in mana I'm fussing about. It's just a real switch of gears, you know, to go from B/J to G/B. It's a real challenge.
Have you written G/B stories in the past? If so, send them to me or let me know where to find them. You have me watching their scenes in a whole new light.
No, this one is numero uno. I have some faves, though, if you want recs. Namely here: http://www.ainzfern.com/archive.htm
She's really awesome. I even like her Voyager stuff, and I can't stand Voyager.
I'd be glad to send you this story once I'm more satisfied with it. I'm always a bit self-conscious sending stuff to friends of mine, especially when those friends are awesome writers. ::huggles you and the twins::
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