Something More Than Men (1/?)

Mar 28, 2010 21:32

Title: Something More Than Men
Author: me
Characters/Pairings: America, random humans (other nations in later chapters)
Rating: PG ish
Warnings: big words. Gen.
Summary: It's 1929, and America's world has begun to crumble all around him. With no ground below his feet, he takes to the comforting movement of the roads, letting them guide him to where ( Read more... )

america, fanfic

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musubi7 March 29 2010, 06:06:46 UTC
YAYAYAYAY! :D
You updated!

I've got some homework to do, so I'll read it when I finish. I'm just so excited that you updated! ^^

this is my happy face icon

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I wish I had a better icon musubi7 April 1 2010, 05:38:48 UTC
Dude!

This was awesome. Seriously. Your work is just like...blows my mind how awesome this is.

In your prologue, someone compared you to Steinbeck. I've never had to read him, and if he writes like this, I'm in for a treat. Imma go to the store and buy a book of his tomorrow! :D Any suggestions?

If there's anything I love more than a story that brings audiences into the world with engaging and enthralling descriptions, its a realistic dialog, complete with phonetic misspellings and everything.

You. Rock.

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Re: I wish I had a better icon ottful April 1 2010, 21:39:03 UTC
T-thank you so much!! >//////////<

Steinbeck is the man. If I were you, I'd go for The Grapes of Wrath, since it was kind of what inspired this fic. If not that, then Cannery Row is a bit shorter but paaacked with amazing characters. Any Steinbeck is great, really, you can't go wrong XD /fangirl rant

Aww, I'm so glad you liked that! I do work hard to make it authentic XD

*hugs you madly* Thank you so much <3

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Re: I wish I had a better icon musubi7 April 2 2010, 01:00:57 UTC
You're quite welcome my dear! :D You write wonderfully. It's such a treat.

Yussss. I'm excited now! Can't wait to hit the bookstore.

*hugs you back like mad*

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Re: I wish I had a better icon ottful April 2 2010, 02:33:53 UTC
awwww, thank you <3

I hope my suggestions help you~ <3

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