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Part 03 - Chapter 31 - Secrets & Confrontations

Feb 06, 2009 17:59

“What in the universe? Verity what’s going on?” I declare as I see the Doctor crumple.

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wiggiemomsi February 7 2009, 02:50:12 UTC

Oh, it's so nice to see another chapter up!

Again, I love the POV back-and-forth changes. And the Doctor had better learn to open up more; like Rose says:

"He asks for my trust knowing I will always give it to him yet he isn’t willing to trust me with his secrets, even those that directly affect me."

Looking forward to the next chapter!

*Hugs*

othermewriter February 7 2009, 03:17:17 UTC

Soo that's where Sam got off to, sleeping on the job yet again. *Points at icon* Next up boom town. This is why she calls Mickey. Not what I was planning for being up next but well thats' muses for you :) Thanks as always for the comments. The next chapter is coming along well now that I have quit fighting with the muses about doing boom town next. So hopefully it will be up next Friday.

yenly_gozal February 7 2009, 15:49:45 UTC

Great chapter! It's a difficult, and yet interesting, relationship between The Doctor and Rose. They just want to protect each other. I'm looking forward to the next one.