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othermewriter

The Weather Series Part 02 Raining - Chapter 02 - Changes

Jan 07, 2008 22:13

I stand watching as she comes up to me, feeling desire build with each step she takes, but then she stops, frozen, looking at me as if she has never seen me before. I release the breath I hadn’t realized I was holding as she approaches slowly, my eyes glued to hers, hoping that by my sheer desire for her she might be drawn to me.

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dr 9, smut, weather series, doctor who, 9/rose, dr who, cooling off, stand alone, part 01

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wiggiemomsi August 31 2008, 01:45:10 UTC

*Gurgle*

*Gah*

Is it me, or is it getting hot in here?? Oh, my; your description of the Doctor's voice sounding like "liquid sex" was incredible! Now, when are you getting to the EXTRA good stuff? Another chapter coming soon, I hope?

Sweet part: 'Pausing directly in front of me she quietly states, "You can stand under my umbrella."'

Love it!

*Hugs*

*GRINS* othermewriter August 31 2008, 02:42:55 UTC

So glad you liked it :) That part came from the song that inspired this part by Rihanna feat. Jay-Z Titled "Umbrella" (lyrics can be found here http://lyrics.dainutekstai.lt/1157/rihanna-feat-jay-z-umbrella.htm)

The new Chapter 3 is already with my beta Lost Wolf Chats as soon as it comes back and I do the final proof it's yours.

This Chapter 2 was 1,804 words the next one is ~4,248 :D Did I mention that Chapter '2' got a bit out of control? I blame it all on somebody I know *cough*your*cough* smut bunnies.

Dr Trivia bit: the Doctor's different vocal cords are actually referenced in two different old series episodes that I can think of one is "The Robots of Death" (where he they are unaffected by helium) and "Kroll" (where he is shown to be able to hit higher sound ranges to shatter thick glass). So extrapolated that if they went higher they might go lower too.

Re: *GRINS* wiggiemomsi August 31 2008, 05:02:46 UTC

Ooooooh; an out-of-control chapter; I like!

Obviously you know your Who-istory! I haven't seen many of the classic Who stories; only saw a few now and then "back in the day," but remember being fascinated by the whole idea. Then, all of a sudden, there was another Doctor, an entirely different person. Took a while to understand what was going on, since episodes were sporadic, but it wasn't until Nine came along -- and Rose -- that I really got hooked! Sigh.... Now that both are gone, it just isn't the same. My only thrill is reading fic, and so few authors write Nine any more!

THANK YOU for your Nine/Rose!!

*Hugs -- and a whole bunch more smut bunnies!*

Re: *GRINS* othermewriter August 31 2008, 05:47:11 UTC

Definitely my pleasure, you will probably be happy to know that as of right now 9 will be around in the Moving Forward series till (at current planning) the Last of the Time Lords and that will include book and other referenced adventures not in the video so a gooooood long time yet.

Any of the other Doctors and their companions can and probably will show up in shorts and the weather series as each part of this series stands alone and will not be telling a continuing story. I have already been toying with some other naughty ideas.