Part 02 - Raining Chapter 01 - Conflict

[othermewriter]

I stand looking out over the complex through the window.  It has never seemed so gloomy and deserted through the sheets of rain I can just barely see the TARDIS.  I wish we hadn't fought, I wish he hadn't yelled.  He has been so angry the last two days.  I know what is bothering him has to do with the war but he won't tell me what, or why.  It was

Comments

[wiggiemomsi]

Oh, my ... this is starting to heat up BIG time!!

More, Please??

More to come :-D

[othermewriter]

Yup working on the 2nd part of Rain right now and 9 is just starting to unwrap his un-birthday present right now (and the bunnies cheered).

In the mean time I have also posted Part 3 chp 19 of MFS recently and have the first 3 chaps of part 4 (which starts with Bad Wolf) I am putting the final touches on right now as well. Based on how much trouble the last few bits of part 3 chaps have been I figured I needed a break from 3 and my 9 muse was complaining because he hadn't gotten any recently and knows he gets some in about Chp 5 or 6 of Part 4 (pesky peeking time travelers). So I figured it would be a good time to work on these independent stories a bit to get a proper warm up :D.

[fl_travelgirl]

Wow, this was very intense. This is my first time reading your writings and I'm very impressed.

There was so much tension and sexual frustration all done with no actual spoken words! That shows a reader how intouch you are with your characters and also spotlights your ability to have a reader believe the characters thoughts and actions. Thank you and I look forward to your future pieces.

Thank you!

[othermewriter]

Wow you have SO made my day! Thank you!!