Comments | othermewriter: Part 01 - Chapter 04

othermewriter

Part 01 - Chapter 04 - Capture

Jan 05, 2008 21:29

I don't know what to do, not that I don't know exactly what I want to do. But this is Rose my beautiful lovely Rose so innocent and sweet. I'm not so naive as to think she doesn't know about sex but she is so young in comparison to me. She still sees the universe filtered by the perceptions of youth and I am old, so very old.
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nina_ds June 19 2008, 04:51:56 UTC

sends us flying into small multicolored pieces which can only be reassembled by sleep.

That's a nice line. Great place to leave it.

othermewriter June 19 2008, 05:03:04 UTC

Thanks, and I appreciate your letting me know you liked the the turn of phrase.

wiggiemomsi June 19 2008, 06:15:45 UTC

*OMG*

*Melts into a puddle*

The *Giant Horny Plot Bunny* I sent DID work after all!

HotHotHot ... great chapter! I think I'll go wake up my husband now ....

qtrhorserider June 19 2008, 13:51:12 UTC

Beautifully, poeticly erotic.

dragonmom64 July 18 2008, 04:22:05 UTC

GUH!!

*struggles to form coherent thought*

OK...I just read this series...and my thought is....why did I wait so long?
Damn, that was hot!!

Off to read the Moving Forward series...

*HUGE SMILE* othermewriter July 18 2008, 14:52:08 UTC

So glad! Incoherent due to overheating was the goal :) I am glad your enjoying.

This series is actually incomplete (as you will see from the update I did on the index 7/17/08. I will be posting a new part soon. Please keep in mind that the Weather series is unlike the Moving Forward series in that it is a series of unconnected vignettes.

scifiangel November 19 2008, 17:50:03 UTC

Wow! That was so hot and yet poetic. You really know how to turn a phrase. Can't wait for more from you.

Thank you othermewriter November 20 2008, 05:15:31 UTC

Thank you. Next up for the T&C people is Weather Part 02 - Raining :)

I hope you enjoy this part as well.

Not sure when I will get Part 03 - Fog to the point where I will be able to post it as my muses are working overtime trying to keep up with doing Part 03 & 04 in tandem on the Moving Forward Series (including the smut bunnies). Hopefully though when I get to just writing the Part 04 chapters I will have time to get back to the Weather. Though you never know when I might get ambushed by a rabid smut bunny.

emraldeyedauter January 18 2010, 03:07:43 UTC

Oh my, I only just discovered this. GOod thing you put your index link up then. I'm not sure I'm coherent enough to leave a decent review; then again perhaps being incoherent is exactly the result you want.

SMILES othermewriter January 18 2010, 03:47:48 UTC

Inarticulate is good :) Glad you enjoyed it.