My friend Raney proposed he and I draw a 7 page comic in 7 days, and so it was done. We had to create new characters and a new plot and everything. He didn't finish his in time, but here's the first page to whet your appetite. The rest are present in a lj cut:
I have some things I like about it, some things I'm not too fond of. A more advanced critique can be found at http://www.deviantart.com/view/24943405/ Mostly I just think it all looks rushed. Go figure :). Some of my influences on the character designs were Dave Kelly, Josh Leznik, and David McGuire. I want to draw more comics more often!