Of Silence and Thievery (3/12ish)

[osco_blue_fairy]

            Alfred found that he had a bit of a problem.

A bit of a problem by the name of Arthur Kirkland.

And that problem had to do with the fact that Alfred couldn’t get the cranky, temperamental, silent and abusive man out of his damn head, scowling expression, humongous eyebrows, and the greenest eyes Alfred had ever seen, and all.  It

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[starfoxx322]

The cliffhanger! D: Here's hoping for some Hero!Alfred action to save his dear Artie.

[osco_blue_fairy]

You can expect Hero Alfred all right! But don't think Arthur will just lie down and take it, he's got some spunk! ^_^

[imbusyreading]

(if you threw something at Gilbert, he kept it) <--That is so going in my head!canon...

Yay, Alfred's POV! I enjoyed it.

You are writing the next chapter now, da? :-)

[osco_blue_fairy]

Hehe, happy you enjoyed!

Gilbert's line is actually something one of my best friend says alot...they are rather similar and it worked here!

Yes, yes I am...you can stop being creepy Russian now, yes? ^_^

[pockygirl]

I just powered through these chapters and i'm liking this a lot. i think with a little work this could stand alone as it's own fantasy story unrelated to hetalia, and that's a good thing.

looking forward to more!

[osco_blue_fairy]

Wow, thank you! It's nice to hear I'm on the starting steps of my goal!

Your so talented!!

[squee101]

Omg it's soo good! Your really talented, it's good enough to be a real book. I would read it, finish the next chapter please!! I'm really excited to find out what happens!:D

Re: Your so talented!!

[osco_blue_fairy]

^_^ Thank you! I'm very happy you think so! That's the goal after all, when I get this done and work on it as a real fiction ^_^!

Re: Your so talented!!

[osco_blue_fairy]

And your icon, it is win!

[retroviral]

OH GOD ARTHUR. D=

I love you so much for making the Nordics elemental-ish. That's hardcore. (And yes, that's 150% why Finland is the wife.)

This is one of the best quality pieces of writing I've ever read, I think. It's like I'm reading a novel instead of fanfiction. Not that fanfiction's inherently bad, but this just feels like it's on a slightly higher level. You should publish this and show that Stephenie Meyer bitch who's boss. =3

[osco_blue_fairy]

Thank you! Happy you're enjoying this so far!

I love the Nordics and I figured they'd have elemental magic, they've got the most legends surrounding that kind of stuff ^_^. And it fit them really well.

And oh jeez, thank you so much for all that praise! I want to work this idea as a novel, but I wanted to see if I could do it first, hence fic. The goal is to try and rework this after I'm done and try to get it published ^__^!!!

And I will show Stephanie Meyer how to write a compelling story and fleshed out characters! MWUHAHAHA!!!!!

[retroviral]

Do we get to see what the other Nordics can do? 8D Because you're right, elemental magic totally fits them and now my brain's going crazy trying to guess what Denmark, Norway and Iceland can get up to. I'm a needy fangirl, please forgive me. I will not love this story any less if we don't. *hug*

Nah, girl, you deserve it. If you ever get published let me now so I can get in line to buy it. Definitely do want. =D

DO IT, DO IT, DO IT. I loved Twilight in high school, and then I came to college and realized that I needed to be institutionalized for terrible taste in writing. Thank god that phase passed.

[osco_blue_fairy]

You will most definitely see what the other Nords can do! I wouldn't be that cruel, showing only two, ^_^ haha!

Yes, one buyer already. Awesome!