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Inception - The Bare Necessities (for quixoticpulse)

Sep 18, 2011 18:09

Title: The Bare Necessities (for quixoticpulse)
Author: osaki_nana_707
Pairings/Characters: Arthur/Eames
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2,854
Warnings: language, dirtiness, nakedness
Summary: Eames accidentally finds out that Arthur sleeps in the nude.

( Eames was seriously reconsidering the whole 'staying in a hotel' thing. )

fandom:inception, type:fanfiction, arthurxeames

Comments 8

kansouame September 18 2011, 23:41:43 UTC

"No, seriously, talk. It's not like we have anything better to do."

The most perfect Arthur line EVER! I laughed!

This was hot and sweet and UNF... wonderful!

twisted_ream September 19 2011, 07:49:10 UTC

The layout is amazingly beautiful!

Onto the fic. My mouth is dry I think that tells much.
and just the fact that arthur pretended to try to get out of the situation when he was enjoying it.
gold.

pheyne September 21 2011, 00:56:20 UTC

Just had to say - it really is the most perfect line. No, seriously -

atira7 October 1 2011, 02:59:44 UTC

*joy*

This was amazing ♥

Sorry to say, but cold_tea February 11 2012, 21:32:13 UTC

this story really ribbed me the wrong way.

1. You forgot to add warnings for:
"Sexual harassment/light dub-con"
(it doesn't matter that later it developes into consensual sex)
and
"OOC"
(at least for Arthur, since why would a hard-ass proffesional con-man with a possible military background be bothered this much by nudity? Invasion of privacy, yes, but his naked ass? A bit improbable, even if he has a secret crush on Eames).

2. for the sake of continuity, Eames woke up at 7 with the children, waited 4 hours & then went to bother Arthur?

Re: Sorry to say, but osaki_nana_707 February 11 2012, 22:29:45 UTC

Yeah, it's admittedly not my best fic and was written as a thank you gift for quixoticpulse. I'm sorry you didn't like it. The four hours time thing didn't seem like a problem to me, considering Eames could have decided to bother Arthur later, but it's to each his or her own. I didn't intend for it to seem dub-con by any means, but I can see how it might come across that way now, so sorry for not warning you. As for the ooc-ness from the scene, I guess I didn't really think it was that unlikely. After all the military background isn't mentioned in this story at all, so I didn't intend for it to be part of the continuity, and some people are just modest. We really don't know all that much about Arthur (or Eames or anyone really except Cobb and maybe Ariadne) so I don't see how it's incredibly impossible for him to be modest about it ( ... )