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orionsroad

Grace Fallen 2/3

Jul 28, 2007 01:26

Like I said, this 2nd part was getting too long, so it got split again, and now it's a triple shot. ^^; I've been madly piecing this together to post tonight before I go to bed, so I'll be posting comments to everyone's wonderful new chapters once I've read them... tomorrow. ^^; And ahaha, sorry, Changmin's bit is in the 3rd part!

Title: Grace ( Read more... )

beauty!jae, grace fallen, yunjae/jaeho

Comments 53

joongielover July 27 2007, 15:41:45 UTC

MEEEEEEEEEE.

joongielover July 27 2007, 17:05:18 UTC

hahaha, sorry, I read slow. LOL.

Damn, Yunho's... really strong when he's angry. XD.
But he's very nice to Jaejoong ^^!
I find the doctor very suspicious. LOL. But, maybe not.
Seulgi was annoyinggg. LOL. Jaejoong's idea wasn't bad; just dangerous? hehe.
Update soon~! <3

orionsroad July 28 2007, 08:27:35 UTC

Yep! You wouldn't want to get Yunho really angry. He's a bit scary! XD It's good he's a nice master, or else Jae's life wouldn't be very pleasant at all.

The doctor, eh? Hm. Well, hehe, you'll have to see. ;D Thanks for reading and commenting (and wow, you were so speedy getting here!)

joyciel July 27 2007, 15:55:51 UTC

Second goddammit

joyciel July 27 2007, 16:11:27 UTC

OOOOOOOOOOHH! The plot thickens. Omgsh the paranoid reader in me suspects that someone will mistaken the sleeping pills Jaejoong got as poison and then Jaejoong will be accused O_O! You better prove me wrong .V.!!

Ahhh I feel for Jaejoong *clutches heart*, I wish he'll get an happy ending T_T!

UPDATE SOON ^_^!!!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

orionsroad July 28 2007, 08:29:11 UTC

Mistaken for poison? Ah, well, you know, you'll have to see. hehe. XD And... well, I have to tell you I'm not very good at angst... I like fluff a lot. So uhm, yeah... you'll be seeing that in this fic. ^_^

naimu July 27 2007, 16:06:08 UTC

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~!!! one more chapter to go!!! noo it's ending!?!

orionsroad July 28 2007, 08:30:09 UTC

Yeah! Only one more. lol. There was only meant to be 2 chapters to begin with! But it got longer and loooonger and loooooonger. It originally started out as an idea for a really sort oneshot!

naimu July 28 2007, 16:05:48 UTC

it's sad to see it end, cause the plot was really unique and i really like it! ^-^ but after this fic you'll probably have other stuff!

deathbyaccident July 27 2007, 16:22:48 UTC

OMG, this is really getting interesting. The beginning was really great, seriously. Like, WOW. I think that was a crucial factor because I was at the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading it. And the tension was sustained all throughout the chapter, and it was really good too. Wow. Nothing else to say, but in my humble opinion, you really did an amazing job with this one. XD

Also, I must say SeulGi's character here was . . . different. Um, the "I like it"-kind-of-different. Although she reminded me of Manx/Birman from Weiss Kreuz (it's an anime), especially when I read the "long red ruby nails". Oh, when I read your note above too, suddenly I was reminded of Ai no Kuusabi (a yaoi anime) too, because it has also this master-slave/pet perspective. It was a lovely, though depressing, yaoi anime. XD I'm weird. I was also the one who said your writing reminds me of Renault. :P

Anyway, I will be waiting eagerly for this chapter. Aaaah, great job with this one! ♥

orionsroad July 28 2007, 08:35:53 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you found the first part suspenseful. I was trying to bring it out all of a sudden, to be shocking and a bit scary to see Yunho like that. I thought it might be a bit awkward though, so it's great to hear you enjoyed it and that the whole part satisfied you. ^_____ ( ... )

ex_isamijae994 July 27 2007, 16:49:35 UTC

aaah! you updated!! I wuv you! :DDD

i am currently sleep-deprived, but i try very hard to conjure up a coherent comment =) well, as always, I love your writing style, from the language to the overall ambiance. It seems that no matter 'what' you write, it turns out good because of 'how' you write it. Am i making any sense? ;p

Yunho is scary ^^V. sorry, I'm just easily scared of people like that. And I don't like it that Jae is hurt. Don't like it at all. Great story, though! XD

anyways, i'm looking forward to the final part, but i guess i have to wait for a long time >.<;; study leave. I'm still your fan *waves*

Good luck with everything~

orionsroad July 28 2007, 08:41:59 UTC

Awww... *hugs* Thanks for commenting through your sleep-deprived state ( ... )