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Grace Fallen (1/3)

Jul 13, 2007 00:56

Title: Grace Fallen
Author: orionsroad
Rating: R... ish? No detailing on the sex, sorry. ;D
Form: Triple Shot
Pairings: YunJae
Genre: ... drama? AU
Summary: Jaejoong tries to figure out just what his position will be now that his master, Yunho, has a new bed slave; while Yunho has his own problems to cope with.
A/N: This is not, on the whole, very ( Read more... )

beauty!jae, grace fallen, yunjae/jaeho

Comments 74

vrilly July 12 2007, 15:19:40 UTC

first.brb.

vrilly July 12 2007, 16:45:09 UTC

HAPPY BIRTHDAY<3

The first time had been to release anger - Yunho’s mind very much on his problems. This time however was to forget, and was much slower and intense. Yunho was focused on Jaejoong, and not his anger, making up for the last time with the intent to bring pleasure to both of them. Yunho’s touches were tender and his kisses sweet, and Jaejoong thought that maybe this was what love would be like.
I don't know why I like this part. What love would be like.
This is really intriguing, do update soon!

orionsroad July 13 2007, 02:31:10 UTC

Thank you! ♥

Yeah, that parts a bit... sad or something. Jae's just a pleasure slave - he's not meant to know love. *huggles him* I hope to update the next part soon. I've written about half of it. ^^;

out_of_words24 July 12 2007, 15:27:54 UTC

I, wow, really like this. Do I detect a little Jaehomin coming up? XD Still, wonderful concept, loved the writing and I can't wait for the next part!

orionsroad July 13 2007, 02:32:23 UTC

... I'm not sure about the Jaehomin, but Min will play a bigger part in the second half of the story.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though I do think this is a bit crappily written. >_<; It's all jerky. ah well.

jaeho_forever July 12 2007, 15:34:50 UTC

very interesting story..cant wait to read more..
will yunho fall for jaejoong and vice versus?
cant wait for your next update and what will happen to changmin?

orionsroad July 13 2007, 02:33:38 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm happy you liked it.

Min'll turn up more in the second part. ^_^

virginangelic July 12 2007, 15:43:54 UTC

Lovely read. A very interesting and intriguing premise I might add. Can't wait for the next update though I'm wondering what would happen if Jaejoong is released; would it be a homin then? Hmm...

Still, lovely concept and all. I want more. Update soon!

virginangelic July 12 2007, 15:45:28 UTC

Oh yes. Happy 23rd Birthday!

orionsroad July 13 2007, 02:41:00 UTC

Thanks! ♥ And I'm glad you liked it - it's a bit messy still, but I'm sick of fiddling with it. Jaejoong doesn't think he'll be released- he's more likely to be sold on to somebody else. But don't worry, this is a Yunjae fic. ;D

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orionsroad July 13 2007, 02:42:53 UTC

AWW, THANK YOOOOOU~! I feel old. ;_;

I missed this place too! I hate that I'm spending my holidays, in which I should have more free time, working my butt off. Hopefully next week won't be so hectic.

Have FUN at work...! lol. *gives you cookies to get you through* o(^_^)0

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orionsroad July 14 2007, 07:10:12 UTC

Gawd, your icons are all like, mesmerising. I keep seeing them in posts and get distracted watching them move around. O_o

AHahah! 4 years older. >_<;;;; My work mate was like - 'In 7 years you'll be 30!' and I tried to kill him with scissors. XD But nyah, my bday went well. I went out last night and had fun and we ate pancakes at 3am. :D (It's a Sydney tradition - one of the few places open 24hours, so most nights out end up at the pancakes place. Very yummeh!) And I didn't have a hangover this morning, which was a pleasant suprise! ^_^ Plus I'm seeing Potter tonight. lols, I'm so grown up. *snortgiggle ( ... )