Gutterflower /1

[orionsroad]

It winked at him. The light flicked off it, creating reflections on the ceiling, and everything else was still. Letting out a small noise, Jaejoong jerked his head to the side, burring his face into his shoulder and squeezing his eyes shut

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[ex_isamijae994]

*HUGS and CHUS*
Don't scare me like that. You did with this scrap .___.
I know I'm wrong, but Jaejoong is like ...a drug addict ... in this one. That, or he is like a woman who just got raped and is pregnant.
(This reminds of my psycho fic. =O!!)
Let it go, bb. You're never alone.
♥

[orionsroad]

Unfortunatly, this thing is a bit... scary.

You're not wrong about Jae. ^^; Poor boy, we do put him through the wringer, don't we? D: (he's not a raped, pregnant woman though... hehe. haven't gotten that far yet!)

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[velcro_undies]

Wow, that was really intense. I think this part hit me the hardest:
He yelled again, coming face to face with the needle, which had rolled off the counter and across the floor, to rest by his eyes.
Using "eyes" instead of another word like "face" made it all the more terrifying. Needle + eye = really scary imagery!

I've never been a druggie, but, man, I have to think you've surely hit heroin addiction right on the nail.

[orionsroad]

Needles scare the bejezus out of me at the best of times (I'm phobic. ^^;) but yes, needles+eyes=moar scary!!! And actually, the 'eye' winking at him at the very begining is the tip of the needle staring at him face on... or at least, that's what I had in mind for it.

I've never done drugs in my life. So I'm totally making this shit up as I go... I didn't even research it properly. ^^; I'm glad you found it believable-ish though!

[ara_niey]

oh dear~
what caused all of that?
poor jae..

[orionsroad]

... poor jae indeed, I'm always so mean to him!! ^^;;

[_happy_as_rain_]

Intense. It's very interesting that his withdrawal could've been many things: insanity, trauma, and his actions are explained in only one line that hints at why.

[orionsroad]

His withrdrawral unfortunatly isn't so abstract - it is what it seems to be. Though it's not to say that nothing else is wrong with him... :/ I'm so very nasty to Jae!

[cherjae]

!!!

<3 <3

[orionsroad]

^^;;;

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