Pieces of You (oneshot)

[orionsroad]

Title: Pieces of You
Rating: PG
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1 330
Pairings: YunJae
Genre: ur... angst? Fluff?
Summary: It's hard to bring yourself back together when you can't find the pieces.

A/N: For kahel_luna, who told me to 'let him cry'. I'M SORRY. IT'S MADE OF FAIL. It was meant to be poignant and all that but... I fail. D: ... have a bunny

Comments

[ellky]

SPOT FIRST

[ellky]

Ir was kinda sad but the jaeho love made up for it.
I love caring!Jae.
This was soul-stirring, i doubt that is even a word.
But nice nevertheless.
Take care, Merry Boxing day!♥
Apt title btw. :D

[orionsroad]

Well, the prompt made me sort of start out with a sad idea, but it's a Christmas fic, so I couldn't make it proper angst. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And haha, Merry Boxing Day to you too!

[jongjin_jaeho]

aww
:D
So sweet
Jae is so sweeett

[orionsroad]

hahaha, I like my sweet stuff! ;D Besides, it's Christmas - you need sweet stuff for Christmas!

[chloe1910]

aw..this is so nice...it's like Jae and Yunho are pieces of a puzzle, that fitted to each other perfectly....one cannot do without the other and the puzzle will not be complete if any piece is missing...

aw...this is so much love...

[orionsroad]

Thank you1 I'm glad you liked. I do think Jae and Yunho fit together like two halves - they compliment each other very well. ^_^

[fallofdark]

Beautiful. Tender. And so not made of fail! Your bunny's cute, but you lie! D: *thwack*

I like this! Very much indeed. I didn't think that 'let him cry' would turn out into this, but it's very clever and I love every part of it! Much love to the JaeHo and the final sentence that tied this entire lovely piece together. Also, much love to you for writing this, bb ♥

[orionsroad]

You're always so nice to me! *squishes you* It is pretty fail-y. I was going to for something that didn't quite work or come out I think and it became rather over dramatic and silly. But eh, I'm glad you liked it anyway!

I'm rather curious to ask what you thought the prompt might lead to? I actually wrote the first 5 paragraphs nearly straight after I got the prompt, and then it took me a lot longer to figure out what I wanted to do with those 5 paragraphs. ^^; And then the idea I came up with became quite hard to actually write.

(And yours is halfway there! At least I know what I'm doing now. I had written two different plots out, but I know which one I want to use now. XD Sorry it's taking so long. ^^;)

[fallofdark]

I'll whack you every time you say fail D8

AHAHAHA. My mind flew to dirty thoughts actually. *shoots self* XD

[No no! It's okay~ I'm already happy knowing that I'll be getting a oneshot from you! ♥]

[starry1]

i like this. the little pieces of jaejoong to fill in the gaps in yunho's do feels so appropriately jaeho...

[orionsroad]

Honestly, I think all of the boys manage to fill each other's gaps (er, in a metaphorical way. Although I'd like to think of the physical happens too. XDXD), and that the five of them manage to keep on going because of each others' support. They're really lucky to have each other to rely on. ^_^ But of course YunJae have to have the special connection!!

[starry1]

that they do. being able to fall back on each other in times of hardship is what makes the boys stronger. and of course yunjae is special! *fan girl mode kicking in* lol