Beta: A War Story, urban sci-fi/adventure/gen

Jun 06, 2013 22:12

Name: Mathilde
Title: A War Story
Genre: urban sci-fi/adventure/gen
Rating: NC-17. Warnings: occasional femslash, a dash of incest, violence/torture, off-screen abuse (possibly rape).
What you're looking for in a beta (if anything): I tend to lose objectivity when I write something and get too close to it, so I would need someone to tell me if there's a fault in coherency, something in the big picture that doesn't look quite right. It's a work in progress for bigbiang_mixup and there's a deadline, so I'd also need someone to give me a boost in a while. I'd appreciate someone with whom I can discuss the story/ideas/characters and bounce ideas. I'd also love some constructive criticism, but I think that's par for the course. Oh, and the fic is probably going to end up being novel-length, around 100K.
Other Notes: I can be a little purple-prosy at times. I also sometimes forget that the readers don't know everything I know and so can be a little obscure from time to time. I'm not at all familiar with sci-fi so I might not always sound like I actually know what I'm talking about. Oh, and while I don't love gore, I can be a little violent sometimes.
Email: goodmorningkillerqueen@gmail.com, but you can also PM me or leave a comment here if you'd rather.

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