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daydreambeleevr September 6 2006, 15:21:19 UTC
“I’ve never had a wolf sicced on me. Learn something new every day.”

this made me giggle.

Suddenly Orlando had a dizzying sense of the wonder of being alive and riding through a white storm holding on to a man who’s last name he didn’t even know, while snowflakes melted on his lips like secret kisses. Orlando laughed softly and tipped his face back to the sky, giving himself to the miracle of being alive.

secret kisses... this is such a pretty passage.

“You have more faith in me than I do.”

Orlando’s smile was as beautiful as it was sad. “Yes, I know.”

This says so much about them. David's disbelief and Orli's calm acceptance.

happy to see another chapter.

kerry =)

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sassywitch September 8 2006, 02:34:37 UTC
Orlando does seem to have a lot of faith in him doesn't he. But I think he knows what he's doing.

Glad you're enjoying it hon.

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wbearsmom September 6 2006, 16:20:48 UTC
This gets more interesting with each chapter. I like the rugged Dave - it suits him somehow.

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sassywitch September 8 2006, 02:35:27 UTC
Dave is absolutely adorable all rugged and snarky isn't he?
Glad you're still enjoying hon.

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crsty1961 September 6 2006, 17:10:53 UTC
OH god I love the way they banter. Sounds like how we talk around here. LMAO
This gets better and better. :)

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sassywitch September 8 2006, 02:36:07 UTC
Their snarky banter is a huge part of their relationship I think.

*blush* Glad you're enjoying.

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surreality_fan September 6 2006, 18:57:10 UTC
ok. off the literal cliff. now a door shaped cliff. ode to the crazy horse and the wolf man. hee.

oh and

Vivid images from the fight in Helm’s Deep flashed before Orlando’s eyes

made me giggle.

*awaits tomorrow*

p.s. i like the random dom and billy refrences.

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sassywitch September 8 2006, 12:17:23 UTC
crazy horse definately needs a smack upside the head.

there will be more random billy and dom to come.

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elfin_saltwater September 6 2006, 21:19:15 UTC
always great to see a new chapter in this saga.

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sassywitch September 8 2006, 12:17:37 UTC
Glad you're enjoying it.

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