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Title: Broken Mirrors
Character: Riku
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts I
Notes: For 'Nobody Dances Anymore' by xsynthetic-smile. I changed songs. XD; Over My Head - The Fray. I don't own anything. ;]

Evidently, now he values them far more than he does you.

( … I'd rather run the other way than stay and see
The smoke and who's still standing when it clears  )

Her

Comments

[xsyntheticsmile]

aww, i always thought this was a happy song. ;___;

er, *runs off to grab ipod* ... scratch that. it's not a very happy song, now that i think about it. .____. (i mean, honestly, "after my picture fades and darkness has turned to gray / watching through windows, you're wondering if i'm okay" .. totally riku-esque. totally. what was i thinking?)

lol, ANYWAY!

poor riku. T.T

gawrsh, this was pretty nuts. i loved how it threw in all those confused, disconnected phrases ("from the black and the dark and the witch and the envy and if Sora’s saving the world, who’s going to save Riku?"); the effect it had was absolutely gorgeous.<3

oh, and of course, lines from canon are always winsome; especially ones so obscure as those. :DD

still, i think you could have chosen better lyrics for this (like the ones i put above). 'cause yeah, the song itself is amazing, both cyndi's version and kevin's, and like .. i dunno. i'm not sure the ones you chose actually apply to the story much. like .. they're kinda vague & generic, and there are so many other ones to choose from that i'd hate for the song to be misrepresented.

so .. yes. awesome job, yet again. just mix the lyrics up a bit, and we have ourselves yet another amazing entry. :)

oh, & p.s. haha, just listening to this album again (when all that's left is you) has plunnied me with a kaixel idea! mhmm, the seasons : "tell me your secret; i won't tell your boyfriend now". ;3 haha, thanks cait, my kh muse is alive! *scuttles off to plan fic*

:D

[xsyntheticsmile]

XD; yesh. I'll look for lyrics from one of the songs you recommended, because, my obsession with this song is unhealthy and therefore I must stick it in everything. *headdesk*

OMGUH KAXEL. *spazz flail* ♥♥♥

[xsyntheticsmile]

haha, okay.

&homahfudgehomahfudge. your layout! so purdayy! *___*

[ lovess ] ;D