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Dec 20, 2008 18:42

Haiku, carefully
choose your words,
do not rush them:
beaut'fly, Haiku.
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Athens: angry riots.
Slapping across newspapers,
They still will not help.
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Brown and honey sweet,
Melomakarona, is
one syllable short.
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Syncopation, by
Scott Joplin, ragtime
master. Fantastic.
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[and now I'm finished,
I hope you had fun with it.
good bye to

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goodbye_halcyon December 21 2008, 18:00:20 UTC
Umm, I like them, but some of them don't work as haiku....

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orangehomicidal December 21 2008, 20:35:38 UTC
nahh! Which ones?
(ah! The last one! Eep! Others?)

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harufunnelcake January 4 2009, 18:48:40 UTC
the one about melomakarona made me laugh c:
its my favorite

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