Smosh Fic: What It Was Before (Chapter 5)

[orangefriday]

Title: What It Was Before (Chapter 5)
Ratng: PG-13
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC
Summary: Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died.
Chapter Summary: Losing something hurts and sometimes it's

Comments

[michaelangelo24]

Woah, that was excellent. It's a totally different experience to see them have to struggle through such emotions and you pulled it off wonderfully. I'm also glad that they found each other... in bed. ;D

[smoshluv]

Okay, so yesterday, I was late to school because of Mutual_Death's fanfiction(darn it for being so good..), and yours almost made me late, too. If it weren't for my mom nagging constantly for me to stop reading 'whatever I was so obsessed with', I would've sat and missed the bus again to finish reading! All day I was impatient to get home and finish:P
I'm so depressed that this is the end...I'm so happy with the ending...I'm so in love with your writing<3
See, I love almost all posts in Ianthony, but there's always a few series that I tend to be excited about and like more; this was one of those XD You're a way better writer than I am; I love your descriptions and creativity!
Okay, I could ramble for hours about what I like about your writing, but I've already written a bible's worth of a comment, so I'll stop :P Loved it, love you, love love love(:
<333

[orangefriday]

I can't go to school unless I check out what's happened overnight in the comm and that sometimes does more damage than good XD

Oh geez.. I've only started reading mutual_deaths' fanfic. I'm in the process of reading greatness!

Hmm.. about this ending... there IS actually an epilogue... but since you've brought up that this chapter is a good ending, I'm beginning to debate whether the epilogue is needed (since while writing this chapter, I was thinking I could really just end it like this). Would you be up for the epilogue?

And I love your comments, even if they're longer than 10 bibles! Thank you so much! Makes me feel so good inside :D :D

[smoshluv]

Haha me while reading this comment:
about an ending...there IS and epilouge...
"WHHAAT!!"
but since you brought it up that this chapter is a good ending...
"no! nonononono-"
I'm beginning to debate whether the epilogue is needed...
"NO! Of course it is! ukwgedhttfuk!!!"
Would you be up for the epilogue?
YES. YES. YES!!!

[orangefriday]

OK! LOL! I'm glad you're excited!

[orangefriday]

In bed, indeed *suggestive eyebrow raise*
Thank you for reading!