Smosh Fic: What It Was Before (Chapter 4)
Title: What It Was Before (Chapter 4)
Ratng: NC-17 ish
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC, Drama
Summary: Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died
Chapter Summary: Remembering and acknowleding ( Read more... )
Ratng: NC-17 ish
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC, Drama
Summary: Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died
Chapter Summary: Remembering and acknowleding ( Read more... )
The beginning was so awesome...I felt everything Ian had felt (the sweaty, desire laden dreams, and then the crushing reality of his TRUE feelings). Then the A/M part was so well written. Both the characters were so believable...like the way Makayla knew about Ian's feelings (women pick up on things better than men b/c they tend to be more observant..so it totally makes sense that Anthony's living in oblivious-land) and then Anthony's own realization. SO GREAT!
The last sentence was so simple...but symbolic and it had me sitting here staring at the screen for several minutes, processing the implications.
Ugh...I love this story so much. There's absolutely nothing I can nit-pick on!! I nit pick my own stories so much, it just comes natural when I read other stories; but not this one.
<3 <3 I'm refreshing your journal until another chapter is posted!! #stalkinglikeaboss :P
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*Reading it again*
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I'm not going to lie, I was flailing my arms and screaming when I read your comment because yeah... it made me EXTREMELY happy!!
GAHHH! *gushes* Thank you so much for reading it and taking the time to make me feel happy XD
Btw, I stalk your page too. >;)
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