Word Thing: 4
I think I may, I think I might... have finished the first chapter sometime tonight. O_O It kind of said... done. Right here. Next chapter. Go.
I said 'yes, ma'am' and skulked away, sort of dumbfounded.
Have a few: ( I suppose this might be kind of spoiler-y... )
"Schuldig’s gaze wandered somewhere over Sanzo’s shoulder, snorting in amusement as Hakkai carefully examined Gojyo . The redhead’s lack of coherent response and the smear of blood across his face had Hakkai in quite the state of concern."
Just to add some perspective, this first chapter clocks in at 5471 words, 10+ pages. First saved draft of this story... 10/14/2011. *facepalm*
I said 'yes, ma'am' and skulked away, sort of dumbfounded.
Have a few: ( I suppose this might be kind of spoiler-y... )
"Schuldig’s gaze wandered somewhere over Sanzo’s shoulder, snorting in amusement as Hakkai carefully examined Gojyo . The redhead’s lack of coherent response and the smear of blood across his face had Hakkai in quite the state of concern."
Just to add some perspective, this first chapter clocks in at 5471 words, 10+ pages. First saved draft of this story... 10/14/2011. *facepalm*