there's a ghost around this town, and she looks a lot like me (halo 5/5)

Aug 19, 2008 00:50



five. looking into the heart of light, the silence

Three days later, Embry walks through the door of Crazy Horse.

Jenny is waiting for him.

“Would you like to see her?” she asks, and he doesn’t need to ask who.

He nods, once, which is good with Jenny. The sound of his voice may make her break, even though she has spent hours ( Read more... )

original fic, twilight fic

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rayerei August 19 2008, 08:15:27 UTC
ISDFKBIAHNQEDO!!!!! JENNY!! And Collin! Don't worry you'll be okay!

Geez. Dude, this was fantastic as always! But, gah, it hurts. Yes, yes it does.

Can't wait for the other two ficcies!

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ophelietta August 19 2008, 19:51:08 UTC
The angst, it is tasty like waffles! XD

It'll be a while for those two fics to come out, LOL. But I won't abandon them.

Thanks for reading!

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ophelietta August 20 2008, 16:24:48 UTC
The heart hurting, oh, it never ends!

That line of Collin's was the very first one that I knew I wanted to be in this fic, weeks before it was even written out.

Thank you so, so much, for reading and enjoying this entire story.

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etzyofi August 19 2008, 23:45:04 UTC
OH, THE BEGINNING.

*HUGS* BB this is just a masterpiece, really. I love the hope, the beauty, the tears and the sorrow that are just like the wailing of the wind before the storm ends and the sun comes shining out. This happy ending isn't unrealistic, it's perfect.

Really. OH ALAN AND JENNY WE WILL PUT YOU THROUGH SO MUCH MISERY BUT IT WILL BE GOOD. SO GOOD. SO LOVELY.

ILU FOREVER. <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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ophelietta August 20 2008, 16:27:10 UTC
BB, THANK YOU SO MUCH. This was supposed to be such a small thing, really, just set up, and then it spiraled out and I got so, so much more attached to it than I thought I would.

ALAN. AND JENNY. I CAN TASTE THE ANGST FROM HERE.

(p.s. I just did the math and realised Collin/Diana will be 17/18 around the same time Alan comes back from Israel.... It's fate, that's the only answer.)

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