come play with me; let me talk to you about writing!:

[opheliahyde]

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any fanfic I’ve written and comment with that selection to this post. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what’s going on in the character’s heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means

Comments

[lavendergaia]

Any of the Sam/Brooke ones. *needy bitch*

Oh, and according to a "dream expert" on Doctor Oz, I want to have a baby. So there's that.

[unavoidedcrisis]

NAME IT LEEN.

[lavendergaia]

THE BABY I AM NEVER HAVING WILL BE NAMED LEEN.

I did meet an adorable puppy yesterday, it was super precious

[unavoidedcrisis]

I bet it was also named Leen.

[lavendergaia]

It was named Jersey. It was an eight week old chocolate lab.

[unavoidedcrisis]

THAT'S OUR CHOCOLATE LAB'S NAME. So ~original~

[lavendergaia]

I DIDN'T NAME IT.

My friend named her black lab Sirius though. Super duper original.

[opheliahyde]

YOU NEED TO PICK A PASSAGE, KELLY.

Oh? So you will carry our child then?

[lavendergaia]

I DO NOT. I PICK ALL THE PASSAGES.

Well, I mean, dream expert is clearly the same as psychic, so...

[opheliahyde]

YES YOU DO.

But dreams are ~inner desires?

[lavendergaia]

BUT I DON'T HAVE TIME. I STILL HAVEN'T FINISHED PACKING. AND I MOVE ON WEDNESDAY. MAYBE LATERS IF THE STORM DOES NOT KNOCK OUT THE INTERNET LIKE IT DID THE DISH.

Well, apparently teeth falling out means I want to have a baby. So says Freud.

[opheliahyde]

OKAY, LATER THEN.

Oh, I see.

[lavendergaia]

BUT FIRST IT NEEDS TO STOP RAINING SO I CAN LEEEAVE. And the doggie is scared.

Or that you have a void in your life, but mostly a baby.