[Generation Kill] [Ray/Walt] Like A Crash Test Car.

[etacanis]

Title: Like A Crash Test Car.
Rating: R
Fandom: Generation Kill
Characters/Pairings: Ray/Walt
Summary: Walt still tastes like cherries and whiskey and he leaves little dots of red on Ray's white t-shirt.
Notes/Warnings: Inspired by Richard Siken's Little Beast. Title is taken from the poem - I wanted to take him home and rough him up and get my hands

Comments

[etacanis]

Oh wow, thank you ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I hope there'll be more too - I've discovered I really, really love writing these two.

[noeon]

For a while, they both think they're going to be okay. That the nightmares and the pain is gone, that they've gotten over it, like you get over the loss of a relationship that wasn't great to begin with, or the way you get over losing twenty dollars.

Quietly wrenching. I really enjoyed the minimalism and short, sharp moments, the sense of biding time and then falling. Ending it with a fight was melancholy brilliance.

Lovely.

[etacanis]

Thank you so much ♥ I'm glad you liked the way it's written; it really is my comfort zone kind of style.

♥ Thank you for commenting :) I really appreciate it.

[fosfomifira]

So heartfelt and honest about their difficulties, all the things that go unsaid and the many reasons why they don't talk about them.

Thank you so much for sharing.

[etacanis]

Thank you ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed it.