Comments | open_on_sunday: Drabble: Revolve (Prompt Turn/Turning)

brutti_ma_buoni in open_on_sunday

Oct 12, 2008 20:13

( Revolve )

Comments 21

crevanfox October 12 2008, 19:59:46 UTC

interesting take on the prompt.

I always liked the way they ended season 2.

Good fic.

brutti_ma_buoni October 12 2008, 21:36:06 UTC

Thank you! It's a gift, that ending - so much emotional power.

xeelia October 12 2008, 20:26:43 UTC

Poor Buffy! She had to do what no one should have to, especially at 17. Great work!

brutti_ma_buoni October 12 2008, 21:36:57 UTC

Thank you! Definitely a tough place to be, and I'm glad it came through in the drabble.

a2zmom October 12 2008, 20:53:09 UTC

Poor Buffy, trying to make sense of her pain.

brutti_ma_buoni October 12 2008, 21:37:55 UTC

I keep writing 'poor kid' about this young Buffy, but this time I mean it double. What a hell of a thing to cope with.

leni_ba October 13 2008, 00:50:44 UTC

I like the jump from everyday life to her memories of that last day in Sunnydale, to wondering about Angel's fate.

brutti_ma_buoni October 13 2008, 19:31:47 UTC

Good - what I was aiming for! The way you keep on coping when something awful happens, but it's always waiting for you when you stop for a second.

cmk418 October 13 2008, 02:00:10 UTC

Oh, this is heartbreakingly wonderful. The last two paragraphs really hit hard, especially after the seeming innocence of the beginning. Well done!

brutti_ma_buoni October 13 2008, 19:38:02 UTC

Thank you!