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xlivvielockex in open_on_sunday

Two Absence Drabbles

Mar 05, 2007 13:10

Title Kodak Moments
Prompt Absence
Timeline Angel Season 5
( Kodak Moment )

Comments 19

a2zmom March 5 2007, 21:02:08 UTC

That first one was so sad, but I liked how it traced Cordelia's growth. And that second one probably happened all too often for Buffy.

xlivvielockex March 14 2007, 09:02:55 UTC

Thank you, sorry it took me so long to respond, been sick. But I do feel sort of bad for Buffy, having to dust your classmates. That has to wreck havoc on the curve! LOL

shinodabear March 5 2007, 21:11:15 UTC

Love the lack of "Cordelia" in the first one. Without the name, it's a bit easier for him to forget about her (even though he knows he can't.)

The second was, well I'm just going to say it, amusing. Getting beaten to death with your own arm has to be a hell of a way to go. Thanks for that image. To be serious and reclaim some sanity, it's sadly something the people of Sunnydale had to overlook far too often.

xlivvielockex March 14 2007, 09:03:50 UTC

Thank you, sorry it took me so long to respond, been sick. And for the first one, I was really purposeful in that so I am glad someone caught that. The second one, well come on, everyone needs that image in their heads! :)

beer_good_foamy March 5 2007, 22:08:26 UTC

Loved these. One of those post-Cordy's-death moments we should have gotten on the show, and your typical everyday Slayer problem. I like how you play the central metaphor of early Buffy there - high school being hell, having to actually kill your classmates etc.

xlivvielockex March 14 2007, 09:04:50 UTC

Thank you, sorry it took me so long to respond, been sick. I think you have seen way too many of my post-Cordy's-death moments. You must be getting sick of them. But I am glad you liked the metaphor in the second one. High school IS Hell!

murielle March 5 2007, 22:51:16 UTC

Oh, the first one was so sad and the second one, funny, in that sardonic-Buffy way. Good drabbles!

xlivvielockex March 14 2007, 09:06:09 UTC

Thank you, sorry it took me so long to respond, been sick. I am glad that you enjoyed them though. I figured since I did one sad one, I could at least try for a lighter one.

murielle March 14 2007, 18:00:25 UTC

I hope you're feeling better, if not now, very soon.

scarlettlily March 6 2007, 00:12:41 UTC

Very nice drabbles. The last was cute and funny.

xlivvielockex March 14 2007, 09:06:42 UTC

Thank you, sorry it took me so long to respond, been sick. But thank you again for the feedback. I am glad you thought the second one was funny. :)