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Pretty Listen (Paulie/Lucci, "I'm Gonna Leave You")

Jun 07, 2007 00:37

Title: Pretty Listen
Pairing: Paulie/Lucci
Warnings: Enies Lobby spoilers
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Prompt: I'm Gonna Leave You

( It's not right. )

Comments 8

merewiper June 7 2007, 00:22:40 UTC

*wibbles*

There aren't enough Water7 stories around. Poor Paulie.

salmon_pink June 7 2007, 11:18:37 UTC

Yeah, the Water 7 gang need more love. Personally, I'm all about Ocean Avenue, which has some great stuff. :D

plotbunny_tiff July 6 2007, 14:15:56 UTC

Yes, this is a drabble of high quality.

Only a few words, but an invokative rollercoaster of emotion that slams into the heart at a million miles an hour.

Yes. Yes yes yes.

salmon_pink July 6 2007, 20:08:21 UTC

Your comments always make me blush. ♥

maldoror_gw July 6 2007, 17:58:31 UTC

Ohhh, bittersweet-lovely. That last line is a kick to the stomach.

salmon_pink July 6 2007, 20:11:06 UTC

I liked Paulie when he was first introduced, strangely prudish little gambler that he was. And then, after the second assassination attempt, after the fire, the way he reacted to everything, it all went from like to love.

willow_osbourne July 7 2007, 13:45:34 UTC

I feel bad for Paulie now, but I can`t stop reading it over and over again...

salmon_pink July 7 2007, 18:48:19 UTC

Paulie definitely keeps up the tradition of blonde boys who fail beautifully.