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Sep 13, 2008 17:40


ONE PIECE FAN-FOR-ALL

Or, free-for-all-fic, or fic free-for-all, or fic-for-all, whatever phrasing floats your boat.

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Part Two anonymous September 20 2008, 22:06:33 UTC
Geez. Way to rub in the guilt with this pic. I really should have just left once I was done but I just had to stay here and see what the news was.

And I was right. The reindeer may be one of the best doctors out there, but even they can’t always squeeze out a miracle and make it all good. To be truthful, I already knew that, as one of ma old friends is coming to collect the soul at dawn. The poor little deer was shaking with that fact and it took near an hour for him to spit it out to the crew.

They didn’t believe it at first. And that made sense as this was Sanji, the same lad who helped them take down both the World Government (the largest bet in history of both the alive and haunting) and the mighty Oz. He couldn’t be defeated by simple gravity and momentum.
Yeah. Tell that to your nervous system and your organs though. They are just pink and red muscle, kinda like that giant haunch of untouched cold meat in the kitchen.

The captain is too busy right now making funny faces at the cook, trying to get kicked by shattered knee-caps and toes, doing everything to make it all better. He’s trying too hard as his voice is wavering. It’s just another proof that boys don’t become men like that. Though this whole ship of boys are trying, like the long nosed boy telling stories in the background about how a flying penguin is going come with some magical beans to save Sanji. The reindeer would be listening except he’s too busy sogging up the pages inside his books, trying not to wail out loud at the hopelessness of the situation. It’s rubbing off onto the storyteller as I can tell by the way his voice is getting quieter and quieter, until he’s only telling it to himself. He has to keep himself from thinking up a grand obituary for their cook.

It’s the same for the orange girl. Ya know that she wants, no needs to do something, anything to ease the pain, maybe like fawning over him. She did do that for some time. She stopped though as there was no eyes of hearts and calls of praise to greet her. It was only the moans, the twitches, and the shaking mess of a lad that greeted the entire crew. She now sits there beside her captain, completely still except for one hand gripping and ungripping his hand.

There’s two others who sit by the cook, a blue haired man and a skeleton. There’s music coming out of them, the melody reminiscent of Bink’s Sake and the harmony, a gentle lullaby. They never stopped playing as the broken patient once said it sounded nice. It should as these two blended together is the same duet that his sisters sang to him on his birthday.

Then of course, there’s the green boy. He sits in a corner, staring at the unsheathed white sword of the girl who haunts both his dreams and his every breathing moment. He knows that the cook is going to join the girl and now he will have two to haunt him. I wonder if that’s the breaking point for him because even though no one comments on it, he’s crying. It’s not sword polish in his eye.

And of course the other woman. I nearly forgot about her as she’s so quiet right now. She keeps on moving around, as she too can’t be happy with doing nothing while the blond lad dies. After all, he is nakama and all she can think of is the tower of justice with her shouting that she wants to live. There’s way more emotions in that thought, but it can all be summed up in one sentence. She doesn’t want to lose her nakama. It’s the same with every other person.

That’s why the guilt is eating me up because that’s exactly what’s going to happen.
And that there’s not anything I can do about it except for... Hmm… Well… Okay….
Anyone willing to bet with me that Strawhat Crew can beat Mr.Death?

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little omake anonymous September 20 2008, 22:07:30 UTC
Omake

Frick. I wasn’t supposed to reveal the cough name. It’s taboo for anyone to mention it as well… Mr. Death. Sounds real terrifying, doesn’t it?
The fight between the strawhat crew and him though is scary. The actual beating because man, the strawhat crew is serious about nakama. Nothing gonna stop them, not even death.
It’s funny seeing him try though.

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Re: little omake anonymous September 20 2008, 22:24:59 UTC
You got me depressed again with the second part of your story! But then the little omake cured everything, I just love seeing the Strawhats pwn Death~ 8D

It was really nice to have this whole story in the POV of someone outside the crew, very refreshing~ Good job Anon!

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art-anon anonymous September 20 2008, 23:37:15 UTC
I love you for that, that's better than I could expected!
It made me cry almost all the time, but the omake made it all up! thank you!

i promised an art and so it shall be! tommorrow, when I wake up though ^^"

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final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 19:14:29 UTC
art-anon sayse she's sorry it took so long. plus she promises to present better copy next week, when she finally gets a scanner in her hands D:

Luffy knew who his opponent was this time. He understood, quite well, how powerful he was. But heck! That meant he just had to try harder this time!



ps. Art-anon wants to thank writer-anon for great co-operation. That was pleasure!

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Re: final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 19:44:48 UTC
Sooooo awesome! Is that watercolor? It's really beautifully done in any case! I love the atmosphere of the pic, and the background and the snow~
And Luffy has a hoodie! (Makes me think of movie 6 ♥)

Go Luffy! Kick his ass and save your cook! *cheers*

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Re: final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 19:51:38 UTC
honestly the photo looks better than picture itself ;_; I dodn't know why I used watercolours when I'm not very good with it, but practice makes better (hopefully ^^")

I love movie 6 (I think it's my personal favourite) mostly because they have different outfits *o* And Luffy has a hoodie *o* And Usopp has afro and Zoro wears smart clothes... and oh... yeah... I'm a retard if it comes to clothes XD

I wonder if he actually will? But yeah, go Luffy, we're cheering you \^^/

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Re: final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 20:59:59 UTC
Well I think you're great with it~ ^_^ now I kinda want to try my hand at watercolor again...

And ooooh movie 6 outfits~ yes, Usopp's afro that I'm always drawing and Sanji's striped shirt... *is a clothes-retard too* hahaha

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Re: final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 22:41:06 UTC
thank you,but maybe I should word myself a little better- it looks o, but I still don't get the efect while painting with watercolours i want to get. It's far from it, to be honest, that's why I said I'm not good with it.
Please, try :D It's always fun :D

And now I'm waiting for movie 10 because I can drol over Mugiwara boys in gangsta suits :D~~

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Re: final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 20:18:50 UTC
So good. <3

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Re: final battle anonymous September 26 2008, 22:55:55 UTC
(not OP) That looks so cool! I love the roiling smoke.

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writer anon anonymous September 28 2008, 23:33:12 UTC
OMGeez!!! It's sooo sooo pretty and it's absolutely radiating of awsomeness and everything and I just love everything about it!! The way Luffy is posed and ready to do something of the gomu's and then the whole scene of mist and oppresedness and... *much much happy* It really was a pleasure to write this and know that it was up to your standards and that some acutally liked it... Thank you so much once more!!

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Re: writer anon anonymous October 2 2008, 12:09:23 UTC


better scan finally

then it's pleasure for me, that you like it :D

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Re: writer anon anonymous October 2 2008, 18:17:20 UTC
I still think it looks awesome! I love the sparse inking especially, I can never do that...

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Re: Part Two anonymous September 20 2008, 22:40:19 UTC
No response, just tears. Good fic, I'm glad you added the omake

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