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[oops_717]

So life is good i guess.... i have an ortho appaointment tomorrow and then i will be off to the mall! WOOT! I'm going to go to my mommy's house friday.... woot

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[the_kid_skater]

hey there umm how are things going for u im sorry i missed ur birthday last year i was gonna get u a new board i felt really bad that i ddint get to give you something but i guess i should say thank you for being there you have been a great friend and i hope we stay friends but anyway maybe u can help me juge which of these are better there 2 poems i wrote i dont know if you have ever seen them well i know you havent seen at least on of them but here they are any way
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Endless Days

As my day goes by
i keep wondering why
we are now apart

was it all a lie
were you worth the try
even though you broke my heart

and those words you said
now forever dead
"i loved you from the start"

and i lie in bed
with your words in my head
and say goodbye sweet heart

because i know we dont belong
so i must have been wrong
i wish we could just restart

but this ends my song
i can only keep looking on
nextime to impart

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Listless memories

as the night passed bye
with love awry
all memories begin to fade

i hear your cry
you cant deny
the love thet you betrayed

i asked you why
you let me die
and left me there dismayed

you told me this
with a soft sweet kiss
and then slowly walked away

please remanisce
and fall amiss
with the time we shared that day

but in remiss
i still persist
in finding my path astray

:/

[oops_717]

i like the first one but i like the second one too. Ummm.... i can't pick. why?