[Fic - Real Madrid] A Coming of Hattricks

[onyxexistance]

Title: A Coming of Hattricks
Fandom/Pairing: Real Madrid - Cristiano Ronaldo/Mesut Özil, side showings of a shit ton of other pairings (Karim Benzema/Esteban Grenaro, Marcelo/Pepe, Iker Casillas/Sergio Ramos, Gonzalo Higuain/Jose Callejon, hinted at Cristiano Ronaldo/Kaka, hinted at Mesut Özil/Sami Khedira)
Rating: NC-17
Author: onyxexistance/openmoments
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[cagedlight]

Things I love (which started off randomly and then went in order and then went random again)

1. The hint of Sergio/ Mesut no matter how fucking faint it was because you know how I feel about that pairing.
2. And then the hint of Seriker because seirously, urgh that pairing.
3. Marcelo and Pepe singing to each other. And the very inclusion of that damn song.
4. Dominate!Mesut because he actually gave me feelings
5. This whole bit: Sami makes his way to Mesut, hand on his shoulder, sliding down his arm because I will get Samsut however I bloody well get it okay
6. And then this: Esteban’s in the corner dozing and Karim’s head is in his lap, softly snoring, Esteban lovingly patting his bald head as Calleti and Pipita are curled up together, Calleti’s hair still stuck hedgehog high into the air. !!!!! The image is just too cute in my head
7. "We could always give them a show,” Mesut says after Cris pulls away Mesut you're a freak and I like it.
8. As if reading his mind, Mesut pulls away, “You’re the birthday boy,” and it’s

[onyxexistance]

1. I'm still really, really, really playing with the idea that that goes somewhere. As an additional fic. Because I know how you feel about that.
2. Now that I think about it, I should have sent Iker home with Sergio....hmmmm....
3. -bows-
4. There needs to be more of dominant!Mesut. That boy is hot.
5. Who do you think I put that in for?
6. Other things I need: Benzema/Granero fic, Calleti/Pipita fic. Things that can be added to my list.
7. I want more people to write him like this. #becauseofreasons
8. If that was my birthday present jfc I'd never get out of bed.
9. TBH, tender porn is my favourite. Because I'm a fucking sap, ok?
10. THEN MY JOB HERE IS COMPLETE AND I WILL NEVER HAVE TO WRITE YOU MORE FIC BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO MORE BRAIN TO READ IT WITH.

[cagedlight]

1. DO IT. PLEASE. DO IT.
2. Yes you should have.
5. I'm glad you did this but I'm still holding out for the day you write me domestic Samsut, or something.
6. I have read one Granero/Benz fic and it was just lovely but I've yet to find something longer. Maybe my Granero/Xabi might be transformed to Granero/Karim, who knows.
7. Sami's birthday is on April 5th. I don't know if I'm hinting his birthday fic should feature freak-dominate!Mesut but I am just leaving it out there. And Benz could be invited too? But like I said, I'm just you know, just putting it out there.
10. You beeeeeetch.

[onyxexistance]

1. Well, I just opened a Word doc and I have oh....three hours to get something down. FOR YOU, CHICA.
2. Now I'm considering going through and editing it in because Iker's kind of disappeared anyways.
5. Awww hale. That is adorable and needs to exist. Better start holding out for something else, bro.
6. The contrast between bald!Benz and hairy!Granero is adorable. Ever since Heartlines I want more Gonzalo/Benz. :3
7. Thing is, I honestly don't know if Sami would appreciate dominant!Mesut the same way Cris would. But yus, even Sami can has birthday sex. You do know I adore him, right? I just have angsty feels for him and Mesut, that's all.
10. WORK HERE IS DONE.

[the_summer_tree]

...

this fic was like the gift that kept on giving. i kept thinking it was almost over (and being sad about that) and then there would be a link to the next part...and the next part...

everything about this fic is perfection. the entire party section is just fabulous. i mean, aside from our two main characters, we got the Marcelo and Pepe show, and Sergio sharing birthday cake kisses with Iker, and the collective foursome of Esteban, Karim, José and Pipita being adorable...it was magical. i have to say though that your Kaká, everything about him, and how Mesut and Cris reacted to him, and how he reacted to them ended me. you had a line about how Kaká can look at you and make you feel special and like you can do things, and i was just like YES!!! and Cris hugging and smelling him was just...yeah

[onyxexistance]

-blushes- Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! It was supposed to fit in less posts but LJ was being evil sooo...But I'm glad that worked to surprise you!

I really need more Kaka. I keep kind of including him and then he disappears and ugh. He's so sweet that I really do need to write him more often.

I am planning on doing a Cris/Mesut/Sergio follow up, which I need to be held accountable, but I'm so glad people caught that! I was wondering if I was being too subtle....

[darkensunrise]

Woo! You know how much I love when you write these two and I loved this! It was so nice to have Mesut be in charge for once and oh boy. It was hot. I mean really hot. Loved this so much.

And the very, very small glimpse of Sergio/Mesut UGH!. I hope you find a way to write them! I love them a lot.

[onyxexistance]

I am so, so glad you liked this! Dominant!Mesut needs to come out and play more often.

And I am hoping, crossing my fingers, that I'll follow up with my tease. I want to do a post-this-fic Cris/Mesut/Sergio fic where Cris is all, "Soooo....Sergio seemed interested at my birthday," and Mesut is a ridiculously eager puppy. I'm really hoping I'll get that one written!

[coldryuuza]

gaaah!! the image of Ozil taking care of bb Cris and Cristiano being all twitterpatted over it ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[onyxexistance]

!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for commenting. :)

[khoshgeleh_16]

Oooooh this was perfect; I love me some Crözil these days! This was both adorable (Marcelo! Pepe! and omg BABY CRIS and seriously I might have killed an ovary with the mental image of Mesut engaging in childcare, because it's adorbs enough when he's around small children, but actual literal babies in a domestic context? I didn't even know this was a ~thing for me. Thanks?) and hot. Like. Wow. Dominant Mesut? Do want. <3

(Also if there is a Sergio/Mesut/Cris followup, please to advise! XDDD)

[onyxexistance]

Thank you for your wonderful comment.

MESUT WITH BABIES ALL THE TIME. :3 That is my wish, tbh. As well as more Dominant!Mesut. I'm glad I could help you find a new ~thing.

And I'm most definitely hoping that I'll work up to a Cris/Mesut/Sergio bit. I have a few ~ideas about how I want it to be, so there's a good chance it'll get written!