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onyu

exo: everything i wanted

Oct 04, 2013 11:21

(You're) Everything I wanted
- Kai/Lay, Lay/Lu Han, Lu Han/Xiumin. PG. 4356 words.
- Yixing meets Lu Han. Lu Han falls for Minseok. Yixing remains to be the best friend despite this. Somewhere in this picture, there is Jongin.
- A remix of kalopsia's (The) Coming Times, for kpop_ficmix. All my love and gratitude goes to Miia for being such an amazing beta reader and ( Read more... )

couple: kai/lay, fandom: exo, couple: lay/luhan

Comments 10

hipployta October 4 2013, 04:10:32 UTC

Oh...Jongin shares his visions and is waiting in the background because he knows Yixing will eventually move on...and perhaps come to him

Yixing...Kris isn't being a prick when you all are torturing him during interviews with your silence (those debut interviews were hilarious)

onyu October 5 2013, 15:22:57 UTC

Hopefully, hopefully. :( Jongin's wiling to wait!

(Haha! Yixing thinks in ways that are unknown to mankind.)

tyreling October 4 2013, 04:51:04 UTC

Awww. This is really nice, bittersweet.

onyu October 5 2013, 15:23:40 UTC

Thank you! :)

pretend_parties October 4 2013, 06:15:05 UTC

oh wow. i really enjoyed reading this \o/ i think its the way you write, it's..nice (for the lack of a better word)

i liked the slow but ever-present build-up of feelings between the characters. There's something very reassuring about Jongin here, in the way he supports yixing, refrains from pushing too hard, but at the same same time says the things that matters. "Acceptance."

i LOVED the fact that he waited.

Thank you for writing this :)

onyu October 5 2013, 15:24:52 UTC

in the way he supports yixing, refrains from pushing too hard
Ah, we all need people who'll keep an eye on us, who'll make sure we're not pushing too hard. Jongin was at the right place at the right time, for Yixing. :)

Waiting has it perks! Sometimes. Hah.

And thank YOU for reading this. :)

charliebnim October 4 2013, 10:49:24 UTC

Awwwwwww

onyu October 5 2013, 15:25:16 UTC

(^____^)v

kalopsia December 19 2013, 10:00:03 UTC

Okay, omg. I'm so so so so so sorry for seeing this so late! Like a good two months late ;; I haven't had internet access in so long, and this is basically the first thing I hopped onto as soon as I got it back (lol, priorities ( ... )

onyu January 1 2014, 17:04:46 UTC

It's so interesting how intwined Jongin and Yixing are but Yixing is just so utterly and completely oblivious to it.
He's so caught up in his feelings for Lu Han, that's why :(

Awww shush, don't feel that way! RL >>> fandom, so it's completely understandable. That said, I'm really the whole plot twist thing worked out in the end because I loved your fic so much. It hurt in such a good way ;~~; So um, yes, thank you so much for giving me the chance to remix your fic and thank you for reading the remix! :)