exo: spin you 'round through the roar of this crowd

Sep 13, 2013 19:07

Spin you 'round through the roar of this crowd
- Sehun/Kai, Kai/D.O., implied Suho/D.O.. PG-13. 7577 words ( Read more... )

couple: suho/do, verse: colors, fandom: exo, couple: sehun/kai, couple: kai/do

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sehvn September 14 2013, 16:32:44 UTC
sobs i thought either sehun or jongin was gonna die bc u said character death
thank god neither of them died \O/
idek if this is brotp sekai or romance otp sekai but oh my god i still love it <3

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onyu September 16 2013, 06:26:47 UTC
A lot of people died in the main storyline, though. Haha! And Kai has romantic feelings for Sehun, but Sehun sees him only as a brother. It's entirely one-sided. :(

That said, thank you so much for reading this! Glad you liked it. :)

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anonymous September 16 2013, 03:53:06 UTC
Oh. My. God. I'm so happy you made this I absolutely loved Color Theory! In the original fic there was obvious tension between Jongin and Yixing and a vital connection between Jongin and Sehun but the story never went to deep into the emotions instead glazing over the past and focusing on the present. Now with this fic it kinda ties up the emotion behind these characters. Now all I want to know is the connection between Luhan, Jongdae, and Yixing! You should definitely think about adding a third part to the fic! In my mind I imagined some emotional maybe one sided Layhan and Yixing also getting slutty mistress Jongdae then jealous Luhan offing him (because sexy jealous killing Luhan is the best) and, and, ha I don't even know but I just really love your work! Keep writing ❤❤❤

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onyu September 16 2013, 06:28:38 UTC
Aww, thank you! Color Theory is the fic that's closest to my heart, tbh, and while I struggle so much with anything I write in that universe, I end up enjoying the whole writing process, anyway. What is bipolar. Haha! Really, really glad that you liked this. :)

Ah, a Lu Han/Yixing/Jongdae side story is also possible. I'm currently working on a Joonmyun/Kyungsoo side story that extends to the "present" timeline (aka Color Theory timeline), actually. :)

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anielluicca September 16 2013, 16:10:18 UTC
very, very interesting and beautifully written *u*

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onyu September 24 2013, 13:52:15 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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darkyulate September 22 2013, 16:40:49 UTC
So it took me a while to read this because sekai but its not even the type of sekai I can hate and omg thid was a amazing ;_; and i love how their relationship just kind of almost tipped over the line but never crossing. That was really painful and beautiful because you know or like you understand that jongin's reluctant to cross it because sehun is so impt (or am i getting ahead of myself??? Lol)

Thus was really nice. I love the super subtle kaisoo and the heartbreaking sudo and just i was thinking abt the ending of color theory and things mixed up with sound theory haha but i think all that knowledge added to the feels

(Pls excuse typos, my tablet a b)

Ps i teared at jongins speech ideky orz

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onyu September 24 2013, 13:55:12 UTC
YUKI! :D

I... never knew you didn't read SeKai o.o That said, thank you so much for powering through this fic (and the universe U G H). And yes, you're right; Jongin's deathly scared of losing Sehun that he's willing to choke down all the longing and love that he's willing to offer just to keep Sehun by his side.

/cue emo music

Oh God, Sound Theory was amazing. I was gushing throughout because the parallelisms were done so well! ;___; And yeah, the heart-breaking SuDo will continue being heart-breaking and the side story will briefly touch on the KaiSoo (told through Joonmyun's POV).

Lol nakakarelate? :P

Thanks again for reading this! :)

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darkyulate September 24 2013, 14:06:15 UTC
Ah hahhaa yeah, I don't read for my notps but surprisingly I can summon all will and power to write them OTL All it takes is a good prompt and some good music maybe OTL....

I cannot wait for the Joonmyun centric fic then because I AM SO GOING TO FEEL FOR JOONMYUN AND LOVE HIM FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE

Haha nope, not really relate but it struck a nerve/chord/whatever because I could really feel the emotion Jongin had ;;;; Idk huhuhu

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dontlookforme December 10 2013, 11:10:32 UTC
omg hello i'm very bad at this but i just wanted to say i liked this a lot ;;;; i love this as a side story and a story all on its own, and i really liked the universe you've set them in, too ;u; and sekai were so sweet haha, the dynamic duo!!! :D i really loved their dynamic here~ i really enjoyed this!!

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onyu January 1 2014, 17:00:43 UTC
OH HI JESS thank you so much! :D I was afraid I wouldn't be able to flesh out their friendship well so I'm glad it worked out. Thank you soooo much for reading! :)

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