Hikaru No Go Fic: Desynchronization (WIP) Part X

[ontogenesis]

Title: desynchronization. Part X of ?
Main Characters: Ogata, Sai, Akira, Hikaru.
Disclaimer: These lovely characters are the creation of Yumi Hotta and Takeshi Obata. Not mine, I'm just playing in their sandbox.
Spoilers: For the entire series.
Warnings: Ages 16 and up. Cursing and sensuality. It's possible the rating will go up eventually.

Comments

[aiwritingfic]

*grins* It's the only chance one gets to abuse you so, dear. Who else can I say, "Throw out the entire chapter" to? ^_~ But the end result was so wonderful. ♥

[ontogenesis]

Lulz. Well, sometime in the distant future, I want to write originals too, so I suppose I have to get used to that level of criticism.

:plots revenge and awaits PW chapters.

[aiwritingfic]

*snuggles* I'm so glad it turned out so well in the end. You realy pulled through there, after getting so much from us.

*groans* ♥

[macey_muse]

Please, do pester. It's an honour ^.^

I know you were having a hard time with Akira, but I love his voice here -spoton. And meep, tension is climbing! *pets Hikaru* Everything's winding towards that meeting, isn't it?

[ontogenesis]

Heh. Well, I'm demanding in chat, but if you invited me in... ^^

I'm happy his voice worked for you. :nods: It sure is... I'll have to do a good job on it. XD;;

[aishuu]

How utterly wonderful - you managed to catch Akira's voice well, and get through the "Shindou finds out" in an interesting way. I can't wait the car accident that will be Sai and Shindou meeting.

[ontogenesis]

Thank you! I'm glad his voice seemed authentic to you - I've seen a lot of writers portray him well, so I had a high bar to reach for. (BTW, I really like his voice in the Meijin!Ghost story).

Well, I'm thinking about the meeting carefully... it's going to be tricky since there is so much that could happen, so I'm sure that no matter what I write, people will think I left something out. ^^;;

[tininess]

HOMG JUST HOMG DLAJFDL;AJKDL;AJ ♥ kdlsajfkdla;j ♥

[ontogenesis]

♥ x 3

I'm guessing you liked it? :)

[thephoenixboy]

You were having problems with Akira? It honestly doesn't show.

Like Macey said, please carry on pestering. I'm probably getting a lot more from you than you are from me. Speaking of which, could I pester you about Sai on Monday?

You know, I was really looking forward to Shindo and Sai finally meeting and you're making me wait another chapter. I liked the way you're using the kifu as a lead in to actually meeting him.

[ontogenesis]

Thanks, glad to hear that.

Sure thing. I love to talk about Sai. :pinches his cheeks: Did you want to e-mail or chat (if so, what time? You're in Britain, I'm in Japan.)

^^;; Well, I meant to have it happen this chapter!

[aiwritingfic]

You can both do this in the Asian leg tonight. flonnebonne is hosting from 8, and I'll be in chat at 10. /end pimp

[harumi]

Chat? What is this chat thing, and how do I join? 8D