Comments | ontinia: The Steps

ontinia

The Steps

Jun 04, 2011 15:12

Title: The Steps
Characters (Pairings): Puck/Kurt, Burt, Finn, Brittany, Tina
Ratings/Warnings: None?
Word Count: 2194
Summary: Their relationship didn't happen suddenly. No, it wasn't love at first sight. Their relationship had to take steps ( Read more... )

gleetastic, fanfreakin'fiction

Comments 19

greencurtains June 4 2011, 21:33:47 UTC

Ooooh <3 Ohhhh so lovely <3 my eyes, they are wet with love <3

ontinia June 4 2011, 21:38:46 UTC

You are so kind. ♥

dri_br June 4 2011, 21:52:21 UTC

I wish it was longer, but you just used the right amount of words to show us once again how cute these two could be together.

In short, just lovely! Thanks for sharing.

ontinia June 4 2011, 21:54:47 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. :D
Even if it was too short.

dri_br June 4 2011, 22:25:42 UTC

No too short at all; I'm just greedy ;)

ricaresinrp June 4 2011, 23:28:49 UTC

Indeed. <3

ontinia June 5 2011, 03:13:49 UTC

♥

david_of_oz June 5 2011, 03:12:12 UTC

This was very well done.

one tiny beta note: the past tense of drag is dragged, not drug.

ontinia June 5 2011, 03:14:54 UTC

Glad you liked it.

Ta. I'll go fix it. Most helpful. :D

lezi June 5 2011, 04:12:21 UTC

BRILLIANCE, BABE! I adored this. It was perfectly spaced and a nice length: not too much or too little, but just enough. And STEP SIX...!!! I lovelovelove you. ♥

ontinia June 5 2011, 04:17:07 UTC

♥ I'm glad you liked it so much. Step Six was a fun one to come up with. :D