The Perfect Crime

[ontinia]

Title: The Perfect Crime

Comments

[iceshade]

love this. so hard. I actually can't find the words to describe just *why* I love it so much, but you should know that I do anyways. I'll just... be over there flailing in the corner...

[ontinia]

Wow, I am very glad that you love this so hard (and that you describe things like that because I do too). I am slowly working on a sequel, which is part of a 100 themes prompts that I'll be posting over here, so maybe, look for that. That is if I ever get it finished. :/
But I am very glad you liked it.

[distortedenigma]

This is fantastic! I nearly cried at how beautifully written it was :)
I like to think that something like this happened...
Thanks for sharing!

[ontinia]

I'm glad you liked it. Sadly, I don't think all of my stories are written this way. :/

[hab318princess]

wow, so glad that got reversed in the year that never was, but still, just wonderful

[ontinia]

Glad you liked it. I'm also glad that got reversed.

[satanassa]

I read your 'photos with speech bubbles' post (it was great!) and now this one. This was great too, only one little thing:

you're ---- short form of the words 'you are'
your --- expresses possessive form of 'you'

examples: 'Gwen, you're not going to be leading this team!'
'Gwen, I am tired of your tantrums!'

[ontinia]

Man, I'm angry at myself now. I know the difference and I try and catch all those little mistakes coz they bug me. But I've no beta and they slip past me, y'know? I'll try and find them and fix 'em. So thanks for that.
But I'm glad you like 'em.

[mv_girl]

Oh wow, on the very last sentences .... I was really afraid there for a moment that this would end very bad ... *sighs* happy now. Very enthralling.
Thank you.

[ontinia]

I have only had a bad ending in one fandom. And this is not it. And I don't want one that's bad here. Well, one day I may have to... but I try and keep it happy.
Glad you liked it.