collide (you and i)

[onthose_strings]

title collide (you and i)
summary ROAD TRIP FIC. set somewhere in the future.
rating pg, as always
word count 2,932
pairing fernando torres/sergio ramos
disclaimer i lie
notes THIS IS A BIRTHDAY PRESENT FOR adorerdollylux. i hope you like it, lovely! and by way of actual notes: i have never been to spain, so sorry if the progression of places doesn't make

Comments

[adorerdollylux]

ohmygod, this is just... amazing. i need to read it again so i can cry all over again and ache with nando and drive through spain with these two beautiful boys and god no one ever really writes them in the future. this is so unprecedented and so brave and so perfect. the thought of just... in the end, them having each other. after everything, they can just fall into each other's arms and breathe. it just makes all this pain and ache and fight right now seem so worth it.

i really, really, really loved this.

They would collide before the end of this, Fernando thinks, and isn’t sure what he means by it.
goosebumps. i got goosebumps.

i can't believe you dedicated this to me. i feel so honored. you are so incredible and such a brilliant writer and just... thank you. so so so very much.

[heyaeroplane]

my dear, i am so glad you liked it. (and also, happy birthday!)

<3

[alor]

oh my god, this is absolutely lovely.

Maybe he came to love the city because it came to love him.
holy shit. ah. that is so. beautiful.

actually this whole thing is just. perfect. and adorable. and ahh. i love them so so much, i'm tearing up a little with love. hahaha. fernando and olalla and paqui and sergio and AHHHHHHH i adore this so so much. it seems like the perfect little ending to all the heartache going on "now" and just. ah. i love this. YOU ARE PERFECT.

[heyaeroplane]

ahhhhh thankyou. i needed something...happier than what's going on ahora, i can't deal with it jajajajajaja so then i got depressed and this is what happened. MAYBE I SHOULD TRY IT MORE OFTEN.

[alor]

=( ugh. i'm sorry. ahhh. maybe writing will make you feel better!!!! hahaha.

[gummy_love]

ohmygod i love this

the pacing and progression of the story just fits and the fact that it takes place in the future when their careers are winding down is just lovely. you are an amazing writer

although i hope that nando's knee doesn't start hurting in the future!

[heyaeroplane]

rafarafarafarafa ajajajaa i'm sorry. it's just your icon makes me happy whenever i see it!

ahh thank you so much! i was so worried about the pacing, it was starting to literally drive me insane.

ME TOO, seriously, if that boy gets injured again i will transfer to become a med student and then follow him around to make sure he's eternally healthy.

[winter_solstice]

“How long will you let me stay?”
that is so sweet! :D

[heyaeroplane]

:]

[totally_loca]

oh sweethearts. This is a wonderful progressive piece and the last line made my heart smile. Olalla made me sad, but Sergio's mummy made me happy.

[heyaeroplane]

sergio's mom was my favorite part to write. <3