the end of the day

Jun 08, 2010 21:51

title the end of the day
word count 1,297
summary celebrating fernando's return to form
pairing sergio ramos/fernando torres
rating nc-17
prompt 023. lovers

because there's never enough sernando... )

fernando torres, football100, sergio ramos, xabi alonso

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sunlight_dust June 9 2010, 02:26:41 UTC
YAY MORE PRESENTS hahah
<333

ohhh that small bit in the beginning with Xabi. ♥

oh dear. I'm such a melted mess right now. I swear, you write Sernando so beautifully intimate, like they're really this essence together that fills an empty space you didn't know needed to be filled.
lol ohman, I probably sound nuts but that's your fault. <333

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distira June 9 2010, 02:32:03 UTC
hehe if i didn't think i'd give up halfway through, i'd say a new fic for every day of WC. WE SHALL SEE. it might force me to finish my prompt table XDDDDD

oh Xabi. i figured he deserved a mention because he was AMAZING in this game.

shall i add that to my resume? "able to make people sound crazy by writing footballslash?" jajajaja you don't sound nuts, my dear.

thank you so much for your lovely feedback ♥

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sunlight_dust June 9 2010, 02:41:38 UTC
alekdjadk that would be soooooo amazing. You can always try every match day hahah. Nothing like the WC to bring forth Sernando inspiration. x]

he really was. Poor bb kept getting hit and he still pulled through.

I think you should. I'll obviously be your reference and they can call me and listen to me flail about while blabbering on about something or other.

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distira June 9 2010, 02:44:08 UTC
oo, maybe i'll try that. at the very least, every spain matchday (and there should be many! *fingers crossed*)

i just. he's so damn classy and i love watching him play <3

jaja sounds good!

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go_for_it_kid June 9 2010, 02:44:20 UTC
Amor this was So so so so damn good!, you are so damn good!! Awwww I feel even more spoiled!!! Sernando owns mi heart and so do you honey, I love how Sergio just KNOWS Fernando loves him, is as though the fact that he is there is all the reasurance he needs...
Oh and btw I didn't know that I could ask a certain number of fics per pairing.... If that is the case then...
I would like 1,000,000,000,000,000,0000,000,000,000 x 10 sernandos and the same for the othe pairings... That's not too much to ask is it? Ok, pretty pretty please????

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distira June 9 2010, 02:50:07 UTC
:] i'm so glad you like it! ahh yes sese knows his nando is just a little insecure sometimes. they are such a fact of life.

jajajajajaja we'll see how far i get on that number ;] i'll do my best XDDD

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go_for_it_kid June 9 2010, 03:14:00 UTC
Yeah they are... That's all I ask for, commitment :D heheh I'm pretty sure there will be plenty of slashy, sernando all over the WC, oh God sometimes I feel like fainting when I think it is almost here!!!! gahhhh WC the mecca of soccer fans :D HIP HIP HURRAY!!!!
wc wc WC WC wc wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC wc WC... AMEN!

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distira June 9 2010, 03:19:44 UTC
amen indeed!

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influira June 9 2010, 03:05:37 UTC
He forgets how much he misses Xabi, sometimes.

Fernando can still feel the ghost of the Sevillan’s arms around him in celebration, holding him tight, believing in him in a way that somehow means more than Xabi’s calm words and knowing glances.
omg i am weirdly tearing up. hahah oh my god. i stared at the picture for like. HOURS HAAHHAHA. and that line just fits so perfectly??? like. i don't know. i sound like a freak...HAHAHAHAHA.

fuck everything in the whole world, i love this so much. and them!!! hhahaha and everything. wow i love this.

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distira June 9 2010, 03:11:09 UTC
isn't that picture just perfection?

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influira June 9 2010, 03:14:12 UTC
ugh. YES. when was it?!!!??!?!! how come i didn't see that hug during the match?!?!

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distira June 9 2010, 03:20:40 UTC
it was after nando scored! right? i think? like, after navisito got out of the way? jajajajajaja idkkkkk

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being_georgia June 9 2010, 05:40:16 UTC
You're so right, there's never enough of Sernando :)
This was beautiful and touching. They never sound dirty to me, no matter what is written. There's always this special atmosphere about them making love, so warm and intimate. And this fic is another example of this special atmosphere.
The most intimate moment for me was Nando bringing Sergio's wrist to his mouth and sucking on his pulse. Just a small detail, but speaking volumes about them.
Thanks for sharing.

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distira June 9 2010, 15:45:33 UTC
thank you so much. i usually don't write ratings higher than pg-13 because i always feel it runs the risk of turning into something vulgar, or not even that, just something not necessary to my characters, but i'm glad this one doesn't cross that line!

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being_georgia June 10 2010, 08:40:12 UTC
just something not necessary to my characters
I share your sentiments. To be honest, I think that higher ratings are often overused. It's better to leave some things between the lines sometimes. In no way it makes stories less attractive, I'd say vice versa.

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robbie96 June 9 2010, 08:21:40 UTC
thoroughly enjoyable and well written...

loved it :)

the line : He forgets how much he misses Xabi sometimes. ...spoke volumes in so many ways ....impressive!

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distira June 9 2010, 15:47:03 UTC
thank you so much! i'm glad you like it :]

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