another state of mind

[onthose_strings]

title another state of mind
rating pg-13
word count 2,193
pairing apolo ohno/jr celski
summary from this prompt at wintergameskink: a little cracky but would love Apolo/JR, after retiring, Apolo decides he needs another hobby and gets obsessed with curling and decides he could do another Olympics as a curler. JR is worried and decides an intervention is in order.

Comments

[fond_ofyou]

Aw, this was cute. I couldn't help but picture JR as the nagging wife, which was an endless source of amusement. I laughed a lot, so thank you. :D

[heyaeroplane]

thank you!

[meretricula]

aww, this is adorable! Apolo would totally have a hard time adjusting to retirement. I love the moments of domesticity between him and JR.

you have a bunch of tense shifts - you could probably pick them up on a quick read-through, but I'm horribly anal and thought I'd point it out. /obnoxious

[heyaeroplane]

thank you!

(fixed! i hope, jaja. thanks for being my second set of eyes here, i never seem to catch that error when i go through it myself!)

[meretricula]

(haha I can't not edit while I read, just let me know when I'm being annoying XD)

[el_gilliath]

I love it i love it i love it

[heyaeroplane]

thank you thank you!

[battywings]

Fantastic. I love JR's intervention.

[heyaeroplane]

thank you! i'm glad you like it :]

[morganmalfoy]

ahhhh I was the OP for this and I am SOOO GLAD it got written!!!!!! This was exactly as cute as I imagined, and you captured my idea of Apolo not letting go EXACTLY. great job!

[heyaeroplane]

i'm so glad you like it! it was a great prompt, i had so much fun writing it. and apolo...i just can't picture him completely letting go, you know? but i would never have thought of curling on my own, so thank you for the fabulous prompt!