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onthethruway01

Guess who's coming to dinner

Feb 15, 2009 23:16

Guess who’s coming for dinner?

Noona finished her grocery shopping and made her way back to her apartment. After fumbling with the keys, she managed to open her door. She dragged the bags in and was about to close it shut but some unforeseen force made her turn around first. What she saw gave her the shock of her life. Yoochun was lying bare- ( Read more... )

het, yoomin, my dinner with noona, smut, boys love, fan fiction, yaoi, dbsk

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char_isa_pirate February 19 2009, 01:01:53 UTC

PURE AMAZING NOONASMUT.
<3

“Whatcha gonna do boy? Hit me? I’m not some pregnant Chinese girl…”

Changmin stood shocked at her words.

“Damn, “ he said. “She’s good.”

THISSSSSSSSS.

onthethruway01 February 19 2009, 01:06:59 UTC

read the yoochun / noona story that is the prequel...enjoy!

shepardlover March 4 2009, 22:46:49 UTC

Oh... I'm so sad for her at the end... is there more? Maybe?

“Whatcha gonna do boy? Hit me? I’m not some pregnant Chinese girl…”
This was an amazing line. I laughed so hard. My roommate was looking at me like I was crazy.

onthethruway01 March 4 2009, 23:19:28 UTC

I was waiting to see if more folks read it and enjoyed it. Oh yeah, there is more to come..violence and angst and more yaoi...I'm really starting to worry about myself...lol!!!

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onthethruway01 March 11 2009, 00:13:12 UTC

you have to keep going. the fun ends and the angst begins.....

stage_persona November 29 2009, 00:43:36 UTC

woa, this was breath taken! one of the best threesomes I have read... ever
very intense... so Changmin is HUGE, good to know.

< “I’m going to be raped by two members of a Korean boy band.”
girl, that's my dream! xD

noona is pretty cool, you know, too bad you make her suffer a lot. it must be hard to watch your lover with someone else, when you didn't agree first
Chun, that wasn’t nice… (but it was hot!)

onthethruway01 November 29 2009, 01:11:06 UTC

This was my first yaoi.

stage_persona November 29 2009, 01:26:16 UTC

It was? Well, let me tell you, what a wonderful first time

is better that what I find most of the times... from people who write 100 fics at month

Well... ext_1298276 August 11 2013, 08:42:29 UTC

THIS is damn impressive! I read the first one. I'm commenting because I know you think people don't read, but most of the time people just don't comment... for whatever reason. I'm guilty of the same. But that doesn't mean I've not read your work, unnie. Don't feel discouraged.

~Cy

Re: Well... onthethruway01 August 11 2013, 13:38:52 UTC

Thanks for reading; I had forgotten all about these first fics. I've come a long way and poor noona was not a very nice girl, was she?

Re: Well... ext_1298276 August 14 2013, 08:32:30 UTC

She just couldn't understand. I'm thinking the homophobia was because YC was supposed to be hers! But, yeah, I'm thinking she could've handled that better... HaHa.

Re: Well... onthethruway01 August 14 2013, 17:24:33 UTC

yeah, she was a bit too shocked to handle it. lol