Stolen

Sep 14, 2010 18:21

Pairing : Yoosu
Author : OnlySu
Rating : PG-13
Genre : I don't know, fluff, romance?
Summary : First time Junsu's heart got stolen
Word count : 470
un-betaed... contains of fail english and grammatical error... forgive me.. *bow*
I need to improve my english.

Well, finally...
I'm itching to write something.
College is busy...
XDDD
hope you like this shorty- ( Read more... )

yoo-su, fanfiction, oneshot

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awshin September 14 2010, 12:30:46 UTC
Hmm you said yoochun denied that his heart was stolen and fate threw him a reason to. reason=kitty saving scene. So does that mean his heart was stolen from the first sight? I just thought it's contradicting. Is that suppose the case? Did you write it deliberately? Thanks for the drabble!

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animeleo September 15 2010, 01:26:17 UTC
Wait, wasn't Junsu the one who denied that his heart was stolen? o.O

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awshin September 15 2010, 13:58:13 UTC
Huh? Okay so it's junsu whose heart is stolen. My question still stands. Lol. I just thought it's contradicting Junsu said yoochun's looks wasn't the reason that he fell in love with yoochun but after that, you said junsu denied that his heart was stolen that's why fate threw him a reason to. Thsi means that Junsu's heart was stolen by yoochun before the kitty-saving scene. Was your writing of the contradiction deliberate or a mistake? Just asking because if it's a mistake, then you have to be careful. =/

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animeleo September 15 2010, 14:47:06 UTC
Hmmmm the way I see it, Junsu's heart was indeed stolen before the puppy-saving scene. It's just that everything he said prior to the puppy-saving scene was a statement of denial, so it's not a contradiction since him saying Yoochun's looks wasn't the reason is just him denying it. Maybe? We should let the author answer, lol. xD

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onlysu91 September 15 2010, 19:54:39 UTC
Sorry for not answering this for a long time. I have no internet connection bb. Well, the first time junsu said that his heart was stolen is a statement of denial. He denied and denied his feeling, until he finally can't deny it again when he saw Yoochun's scene with the puppy. If you didn't get it, then i apologize for my lack of skill to deliver the meaning for u. I still need to improve an be careful. Thank for the question though, i have just learnt something here... XD
and i hope you understand my babbling, my english words are rapidly leaving me, since i haven't written anything for such a long time.
Also thanks for the comment... XD

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awshin September 18 2010, 03:54:13 UTC
No no no. It's just me being confused if the contradiction of the story is on purpose or what. Thanks for the explanation! =D

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