just the girl (2/2)

[nessismore]

Title: just the girl
Fandom: Inception
Characters: Ariadne, Arthur, Eames, Yusuf, Cobb, Saito
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,512 (9,440 in all)
Summary: It's because she's a girl. That's why they all possess this ridiculous need to step in and save her, and they each do it in their own special way.
Disclaimer: Inception and all associated characters do not

Comments

[firei]

I loved this! I'm not normally a big commenter, but this is one of the best A/A fics I've read - fantastic job and thanks for sharing! :)

[nessismore]

i'm glad you came out of the commenting woodwork to comment now! I'm very glad that you liked it--it took a lot of work to finally get it where I wanted it to be and it's gratifying to know that it paid off! Thanks very much for commenting!

[angleico315678]

I love the boys being protective of Ariadne even though we full well know she doesn't need it. I'm glad you wrote it longer than you expected, it was such a pleasure to read.

I especially liked Eames and Yusuf's part in this story. Saito's was so generous and nice. He should become his godfather or something...the nice one who spoils you with money or anything you want. I love Cobb's role of a overprotective father figure and it's nice to know that he cares. And Arthur...what shall I say. They are so perfect for each other because they are exact opposites.

Can I just say that I love Yusuf's role in this fic? He's like a best friend to Ariadne and it's so adorable. I want a Yusuf but not as much as I want an Arthur!

Great job! Thanks!

[nessismore]

I'm glad you liked it! This was a lot harder to get out than most of my other fic, mostly I think because it was so long. Each section was supposed to be 500 words, max, but there was so much I wanted to add to Eames and Yusuf's parts and I couldn't bring myself to cut anything out, so...it just all kind of ballooned from there. But I'm fairly happy with the results, myself.

Ariadne and Yusuf will always be BFFs in my head, and that was my favorite part of the whole thing to write! And haha, I'm selfish and want a Yusuf and an Arthur :P

Thanks so much for commenting! :)

[unomega]

Her BFFery with Yusuf is awesome. Eames is especially cunning. Saito.. is rich, but very nice. Cobb is... man I'd be so pissed lol. I would date just to spite him also. And Arthur, aw man, I actually winced when he said her dating would be a good thing. But they're so adorable together I forgive him. <3 this!

[nessismore]

Ariadne and Yusuf BFFery ftw! I think I'm now going to try to find ways to incorporate it into every story I write because it's awesome. I'm glad you liked the story and thanks for commenting!

[evrymemry]

If anyone tells you to stop writing fanfic, I'm going to pull an "Uncle Dominic" on them, I swear. <3

[nessismore]

Haha, thank you <3 I don't think that'll be a problem either way, because writing A/A is just too addicting. I don't have the willpower to resist :P

thanks for commenting :)

[elliesmeow]

I like the romance idea much better than one that involves projections. Unless of course Arthur tries kissing as a distraction again.LOL

Delightful fic. I really loved Cobb butting in on Ari telling the other guys about the mean girl at school. But his "help" was not my favorite, I loved Yusuf's best of all. Yeah, the romance was awesome don't get me wrong. Loved that too. But I adore the idea of Ariadne and Yusuf as besties.LOL

Thanks for posting. And for the record, I do not support this "stop writing fanfic" initiative you have proposed.;)

-Ellie

[nessismore]

Haha, if I'd gone with the projection idea, Arthur would definitely try using kissing as a distraction. Always :p I'm glad you liked the romance :)

And Yusuf's was definitely my favorite part to write because Yusuf and Ariadne will always be bffs in my head. It's so awesome that there are so many people who think so too!

Thanks for commenting! And haha, I doubt I could stop writing fanfic even if I tried :p Thank you!