Hitman 9/?

[only4dbsk]

Yoochun narrowed his eyes at the smug look Junsu had fixed on his face.

“I mean, it makes perfect sense. Your last name is Park, he told me you lived in Seoul, and your facial features are similar enough. I think the way you held your pillow to your chest and wrinkled your nose really gave it all away.”

Yoochun growled. “How do you know him?”

“So he

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Spot! for Talia

[captainmarvel]

:)

Re: Spot! for Talia

[kingdoms_lust]

NAWWW~! you didn't have to spot me.. this was for you... =)

HOLY CRAP~! I could sooo see the YooSu moments unfold.. like I was standing there watching it myself...& another HOLY CRAP!!! MinHo phone convo gave me shivers they were hell trying to kill each other over the phone! who screamed? well muffled screaming then panting? I'm curious... lol!

Man I would say calm before the storm but Min is playing with fire... I hope it's worth it?! O__O" WOOOO~! can't wait for the next chapter... ^_^ *claps excitedly*

Re: Spot! for Talia

[only4dbsk]

meh, whatevs, u still get a spot ^^ xDDD

well, there's always something violent going on in their world so i wouldnt be surprised if theres random muffled screams in random places xDDD

oh and glad u liked the yoosu drama, it was waYYY TOO much fun to write xD

^___________^ thanksssss baby!

Re: Spot! for Talia

[kingdoms_lust]

I know.. I still feel kinda guilty... *shrugs* THANK YOU KATHY~! =)

nawww... and I was thinking it may have been me! LOL~! kidding.. or was I?

They held hands well Su did the holding.. and Chun didn't pull away and I awww'd.. I awww'd out loud cause well it was cute.. and Micky missed.. I mean missed a shot.. :O lol... OMBFG~!

welcome... =p loved it... I can't wait to read more of this awesomeness that's called Hitman.. ^___^ ♥

[captainmarvel]

OMG OMG OMG!
I loved that YooSu scene!
Yoochun is right though; Junsu has no idea what Yoochun has been through.
Junsu really let his emotions get the better of him.
Junsu has no right to judge Yoochun.

:O that scene between Yunho and Changmin is unsettling.
There is a huge storm brewing.

This chapter was amazing baby!

Thank You ♥

[only4dbsk]

8DD!
the drama was intense huh ;D

writing the homin kinda scared me lol!

thank you!! u know ur awesomee ♥!

[be_ddelusionall]

Smut!!!!

[be_ddelusionall]

OMG THE DRAMA

http://www.dramabutton.com/

God, the YooSu (movie quote: "How could you miss? He was three feet in front of you!")

seriously, this chapter is like ... pivotal (can't wait for JaeMin!!! Hot damn!)

Only issue: He stood to his feet, right behind Yoochun and with troubled eyes gave him a long look over. ... ... um, where else is he going to stand. You can't really ... stood to your knees or stood to your head. classic example of redundancy, and trust me, you're not the only one. I've seen this phrase published in books before. *shivers*

[only4dbsk]

dun dun dunnnn :) that button is so random but soo necesarry!!

OMG LOL! ok, i never thought of it like that! AHHAHAHAH!!! 8'D stood to your head. HAHAHAH xDDD *fixes that* *still laughing* ur awesome

anyways, thanksss *hugss*

[be_ddelusionall]

I edited someone's story once and in every single chapter, she had that phrase ... and I'm like ... OKAY, know what, fix all of these, and then send it back to me.

you can say something like ... "climbed to his feet" or "struggled to his feet" or "struggled to stand" that way you can show how it was hard for Junsu to stand up.

[tvxqforeverlove]

late spot! AGAIN! XD

[tvxqforeverlove]

omg
OMG
I HAVEN'T EVEN FINISHED READING. BUT OMG MEENA.
OMGGG
DADASDASDASD
ASFNSLSJ;FGAG'GSFD

-will be back when is more coherent and has calmed down and has actually finished the chapter-

OMG.

[only4dbsk]

.......whatt?
calm down dude. o.o

[tvxqforeverlove]

how can I calm down? XD DUDEEEE IT'S LIKE A DRAMA!!!!

omg so COOOOL! it's yoochun's brother's best friend... and he got the gun and pulled the trigger but he missed! OMG SO GOOD!

lolol

omgomg so yoohwan and junsu are BFFs?
this puts yoochun in a hard position, yes.
but aah, the yoosu, they basically held hands!
YES everything is going according to plan,
I think it was just the drama that made me go crazy
damn, this action, it usually doesn't phase me
but you write so well I feel like I'm in the story
and now I'm just beggin' for morey!

XDD

the homin confrontation was so damn epic! I wonder what's gonna happen to junsu! I REEEEAAALLLYYYYY want moar. please. -begs-

♥

[dorkii_simba]

O__O......you have answered my prayers hahahaha. spot~

[dorkii_simba]

sushi made me pissed off a bit when he was *coughs* doing his "preaching". especially about the selling yoohwan part *fumes* that was ridiculous and a bit overboard. i'm sure everyone has said this, but junsu shouldn't judge. he doesn't understand what chunky went through. blah...anyways... i really loved the yoosu at the end. really touching scene ♥.

“Well at least you admit you’re a dog.”

“Pitbull, baby.”

you know when i read that i was like "pitbull? oh lord, *palm face*". hah, homin really entertains me.
ps: loose crazy monkey would spazz next time... i suddenly just went emo...

[only4dbsk]

chunky's a bit more sensitive than sushi realizes, guess he blew his top huh. but id be a little pissed off after being captured and held hostage and beaten up like that.

lol! pitbulls are awesome ♥!

wae you emo? hope everything is fine *hugs*

♥ love ya crazy monkey

[dorkii_simba]

true; i probably would too especially with this bad temper of mine. haha. pitbulls - i like the puppies, they're adorable.

blah *hugs* probably just thinking too much.

♥ thanks, me love you too :']