[FOR ZHENCHENG] IF YOU WERE A SONG (EVERYONE WOULD SING ALONG WITH YOU)

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RECIPIENT: zhencheng
TITLE: if you were a song (everyone would sing along with you)
LENGTH: 5079
WARNINGS: excessive sap, omg
SUMMARY: college au, romance. Zhang Yixing, morning DJ, aspiring actual musician, desperately in need of caffeine.
FINAL NOTES: the title is from the khalil fong track 'love song'. thanks to a for making this entry actually happen;

Comments

[ukexing]

First things first I'm a real-- jokes sorry let me start again. Iggy Azalea has no place in this comment.

BEFORE I SAY ANYTHING CAN I JUST SAY THAT I LOVE COLLEGE!aus with PERFECTLY WRITTEN MUSICIAN!YIXING AND THE FACT THAT YIXING GOES TO A CONSERVATORY MAKES ME VERY EXCITED. I go to a music conservatorium myself (violin major wooo!!!) And the fact that you included things that only classical musicians would understand shows that you really know what you're talking about! That makes music!aus so much more enjoyable because there's no random meandering about with the facts. (I see that you sneakily mentioned Benjamin Britten and I almost flipped out because oh my goodness I had to write an essay on a Britten elegy last semester and I DIED.) ANYWYAS, nerdy musician blahblah's aside....

WOW there's just something really lyrical about the way you write and the way you portrayed LayHan's relationship (no puns intended). Although their storyline is compact, the development was soft spoken and just enough to qualify. And idk there's just something about the imagery and description and syntax and vocabulary that gives this fic this overwhelming feel of... IDEK BEauTIFULNESS (??? NOT EVEN A WORd lol). Tl; dr I love the dialogue, the cheesy radio DJ lines and Yixing's music taste. I love their personalities - so real and ic (well in my head that's how I imagine them). This is a wonderful piece, no doubt about it! ♡♡