Anyway, point still stands, this was one of the most gorgeous things I've ever read. ♥ I remember I spent hours reading this fic over and over, dissecting it and looking at how your structure the sentences and link the words to create such atmosphere. Out of everything [bar Reverie XD because I can't even measure the time I went through that one] this is definitely one of your best work, imo. Maybe because you actually liked it? I thought the emotions were so clear, and meaningful.
lol did you forget that? *amused* hahahah you forgot about this LOLLLLLL XD
:x that scares me. the fact that you spent hours dissecting it :c considering I just wrote it... like I was in some certain mood ._. I wish I knew how to capture this mood back aish. Like it was different than reverie /sigh that one I worked on a lot (this one too) but it was different :c
thank you^^; ♥ your comments always mean so much to me ♥
I...am not in my right mind atm -__-;; so I don't know what I remember and don't remember XD
Why would you be scared? XD I meant dissect like....I looked at what words you choose, how you linked them together, the length of sentences and the response, that sort of thing XDDD I'd do the same thing to my own fics if I wanted to recreate a feeling so I could apply it somewhere else. I think Reverie was my fav? If I had to choose, I'd say that one was my fav ♥ Maybe it depends on your environment? You said you were in a weird mood, ever thought what kind of mood it was?
because the thought of someone dissecting my writing scares me. So the idea of me sitting there anaylsing every sentence/word etc in yours doesn't scare you? I mean that's when I'd start getting critical about fics if I pick them apart :c
I just go with feelings .___. and moods if I;m in the mood to write something I do. XD /fails I basically suck at technique :/ I just... write whatever really so that is why it scares me if u pick it apart.
not really. I just wanted to write something simple. And I was super distracted that day... but I had the idea in my head. I guess its more if I have an image in my head. Or maybe :c when I'm inspired. since 99% of the time I'm not inspired.
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/fails :(
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Anyway, point still stands, this was one of the most gorgeous things I've ever read. ♥ I remember I spent hours reading this fic over and over, dissecting it and looking at how your structure the sentences and link the words to create such atmosphere. Out of everything [bar Reverie XD because I can't even measure the time I went through that one] this is definitely one of your best work, imo. Maybe because you actually liked it? I thought the emotions were so clear, and meaningful.
So, bottom line, I adored this. ♥
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:x that scares me. the fact that you spent hours dissecting it :c considering I just wrote it... like I was in some certain mood ._. I wish I knew how to capture this mood back aish. Like it was different than reverie /sigh that one I worked on a lot (this one too) but it was different :c
thank you^^;
♥ your comments always mean so much to me ♥
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Why would you be scared? XD I meant dissect like....I looked at what words you choose, how you linked them together, the length of sentences and the response, that sort of thing XDDD I'd do the same thing to my own fics if I wanted to recreate a feeling so I could apply it somewhere else. I think Reverie was my fav? If I had to choose, I'd say that one was my fav ♥ Maybe it depends on your environment? You said you were in a weird mood, ever thought what kind of mood it was?
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because the thought of someone dissecting my writing scares me. So the idea of me sitting there anaylsing every sentence/word etc in yours doesn't scare you? I mean that's when I'd start getting critical about fics if I pick them apart :c
I just go with feelings .___. and moods if I;m in the mood to write something I do. XD /fails I basically suck at technique :/ I just... write whatever really so that is why it scares me if u pick it apart.
not really. I just wanted to write something simple. And I was super distracted that day... but I had the idea in my head. I guess its more if I have an image in my head. Or maybe :c when I'm inspired. since 99% of the time I'm not inspired.
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