Sinking | Damon/Elena | PG-13ladyknight1512March 20 2011, 01:40:42 UTC
He first bit her on a Tuesday. It happened before she had a chance to resist but either way, she didn't want to.
He had been pressing heated kisses down the length of her throat; her fingers had tightened around the hair at the nape of his neck. Her breathy sigh was matched by his tortured groan and then...
Two sharp pricks. A brief flare of pain. A strange pulsing sensation.
Caroline had told her once, recalling her "relationship" with Damon, how it felt to be bitten. How usually it hurt but then sometimes, when he was feeling sweet, it could be a pleasure so unbearable she almost wanted to scream to make it stop.
For Elena, it was like the warmth of sinking into a steaming bath. Her eyelids drooped, her whole body relaxed, her mind drifted away into half-formed dreams.
Still, she knew the instant what he'd done registered in his head. One minute he was there, in her arms, folding her into him, the next he was backing up to the opposite wall, eyes wild, lips red.
Elena felt cold and lonely.
"I'm sorry."
His voice carried a string of emotions: fear, desire, regret, lust. He had promised to never bite her. She could reprimand him, turn her back, walk away, hold him at arms length until she was certain it wouldn't happen again.
Re: Sinking | Damon/Elena | PG-13ladyknight1512March 22 2011, 21:33:14 UTC
Awww! Thank you! And of course you can rec this, but could you use the link to my fanfic journal instead of here please? Just for convenience, and if anyone comments, it's easier for me to keep track. You can find the story at: http://ladyknight-fic.livejournal.com/9987.html
Re: Sinking | Damon/Elena | PG-13brightstarmaraMarch 23 2011, 11:34:57 UTC
;) Perfect! As soon as the post is up, I'll send you a link. It might take a while, I want at least three stories from three different authors. So I'm keeping my eye on this post...
Re: Sinking | Damon/Elena | PG-13lit_chick08March 22 2011, 21:29:17 UTC
I loved this. The imagery in it was incredible and I especially loved this line: How usually it hurt but then sometimes, when he was feeling sweet, it could be a pleasure so unbearable she almost wanted to scream to make it stop. because it seemed like such an incredible assessment of Damon as a character.
He had been pressing heated kisses down the length of her throat; her fingers had tightened around the hair at the nape of his neck. Her breathy sigh was matched by his tortured groan and then...
Two sharp pricks. A brief flare of pain. A strange pulsing sensation.
Caroline had told her once, recalling her "relationship" with Damon, how it felt to be bitten. How usually it hurt but then sometimes, when he was feeling sweet, it could be a pleasure so unbearable she almost wanted to scream to make it stop.
For Elena, it was like the warmth of sinking into a steaming bath. Her eyelids drooped, her whole body relaxed, her mind drifted away into half-formed dreams.
Still, she knew the instant what he'd done registered in his head. One minute he was there, in her arms, folding her into him, the next he was backing up to the opposite wall, eyes wild, lips red.
Elena felt cold and lonely.
"I'm sorry."
His voice carried a string of emotions: fear, desire, regret, lust. He had promised to never bite her. She could reprimand him, turn her back, walk away, hold him at arms length until she was certain it wouldn't happen again.
"I'm not."
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Really nice. Would it be okay with you if I rec this story at my journal? I'd send you a link, of course!
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Thanks!
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here is a link to my previous recs. My LJ is tiny tiny tiny. But every bit of attention I can give authors...
http://brightstarmara.livejournal.com/53842.html
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Great job.
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