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onegrapeshy

Unhappy WIP

Apr 17, 2008 09:41

I spent 6 hrs yesterday revising, managed to get through 14 chapters, came up with a totally awesome twist--and then, when I got home, my copyedits had arrived ( Read more... )

revising, linnea, copyedits, martha

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lalam April 17 2008, 14:57:13 UTC

poor Linnie... I can see why she'd be upset. You've spent so much time on her and you just abandon her for Shawna! But I understand.

Perhaps, you can tell Linnie that she and Shawna will be starring in a short story just for laura sometime in the near future??? :)

That just might make her happy.

btw, you're brilliant!

onegrapeshy April 17 2008, 15:26:40 UTC

Shawna and Linnie together...in the same room...wow, I can write my own fan fiction. :)

You wouldn't say "brilliant" if you could see all the FREAKING TYPOS my copyeditor pointed out. Argh!

lalam April 17 2008, 15:44:39 UTC

I'm an excellent at spelling and quite awesome at grammar, too!

You need help, just ask!

onegrapeshy April 17 2008, 15:53:15 UTC

Well, I can always use another First Reader... :)

lalam April 17 2008, 16:13:15 UTC

That would be ME!!!!!!!!!! Whole-heartedly! But I'm honest, fair and will tell you if something doesn't flow.

onegrapeshy April 17 2008, 16:14:08 UTC

That's exactly what I want. Flow. Suckage. Everything.

lalam April 17 2008, 16:39:26 UTC

I'm your girl!

just e-mail me what you're not happy with. with a synopsis of what you're trying to accomplish. That way, it's not too overwhelming. I can help out. I'm really 17 in a 40 yo body!;)

lauram66-at-gmaildotcom

onegrapeshy April 17 2008, 17:12:15 UTC

OK! Let me get through this first revision and you're on!

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