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one_sh0t

More fic!

May 28, 2007 04:44

A few moments ago Atobe-buchou rang me up and said he needed a favour of me? So, um, here it is Atobe!

Title: Snakes on a Sora Tachibana
Author: one_sh0t
Rating: Ummm. NC-17!
Pairing: Chitose/Tachibana
A/N:: I originally wrote this for Kingdom Hearts way back when, but Atobe asked if I could edit it to suit his needs, so here you go! It's AU!
OOC: This is ( Read more... )

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lunar_luna May 28 2007, 03:59:59 UTC

Hm. Naga are cold-blooded, you know.

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:01:21 UTC

They are?

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:02:28 UTC

Yes. That's the only critique I really have, though.

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:03:14 UTC

Oh! Does the fact that they're cold blooded take something away from the piece?

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:05:36 UTC

I think it suspends belief a bit when you mention how hot his saliva is and such. Maybe you could change those bits to "luke-warm" or "tepid"?

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:08:05 UTC

Maybe I'll think of that next time! Thanks for your helpful suggestion!

Have we met before?

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:09:53 UTC

I don't think so. My name's Luna Lovegood.

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:18:38 UTC

Hi! I'm Ootori!

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:23:56 UTC

Hullo, Ootori! It's nice meeting you.

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:28:16 UTC

And you!

Do you write fic a lot?

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:29:12 UTC

I've never tried! But I think I might in the future. It looks quite fun.

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:36:33 UTC

It is very fun! I'd be happy to read anything you write!

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:41:15 UTC

Lovely! I've never written fanfiction before; do you have any pointers for me?

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:44:08 UTC

Well, what kind of fanfiction are you looking to write?

lunar_luna May 28 2007, 04:47:22 UTC

Maybe something with a zeppelin.

one_sh0t May 28 2007, 04:50:26 UTC

What's a zeppelin?

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